Billy Simani Poet Rhyme

Be Thy Valentine For a Little While

Please stay a little while longer,
Hold me closer if only for a while,
Cry if you want I give you my shoulder,
Be Thy Valentine For  A Little While,

Let’s sit and gaze at the moon,
While we cuddle after a moments smile,
Feel every spasm so sudden so soon,
Be Thy Valentine For  A Little While,

I have the answer to your every wish,
Be it a kiss, love, put them in a pile,
Let’s live this moment even if in a notion,
Be Thy Valentine For  A Little While,

Feel my heavy breathing down your neck,
As I explore the pleasure not found in a smile,
So pure is love, am unable to find in a speck,
Be Thy Valentine For  A Little While,

Let’s overdose on insomnia and forget about sleep,
As we loose ourselves in quality time for just a mile,
If you be the shepherd am no less a sheep,
Be Thy Valentine For  A Little While,

If you leave I pray don’t say goodbye,
Sadness would drive me to faint and I won’t revive on salvolitile,
Just tell me you’ll be back even if it’s a lie,
Be Thy Valentine For  A Little While

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Barbara Gorelick February 22, 2013 at 6:33 PM Congrats to you..I love the the last stanza especially. BG Billy Simani February 26, 2013 at 10:53 PM Just tell me you'll be back even if it's a lie... The last stanza was inspired by my girlfriend, she always tells me to tell her ill be back even if its a lie. She hates goodbyes.

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2013 at 6:08 PM this one is DARLING. One of the most interesting ones I am seeing on the winners list. Big congrats on your well deserved win. Billy Simani February 26, 2013 at 10:54 PM Thanks a lot Andrea, its been an honor for me to participate in the poetry contest. My first ever win and i feel like am ready for more.

Debbie Guzzi February 22, 2013 at 2:03 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Billy Simani February 26, 2013 at 10:56 PM Light & Love it is Debbie, seeing all the warm welcoming comments from you guys makes me want to cry... then i ask myself why? That's poetry.

Connie Gildersleeve February 22, 2013 at 7:40 AM Congrats on your big win. Well deserved Billy Simani February 26, 2013 at 10:56 PM Thanks Connie, i hope i'll keep on impressing you and the whole poetry community.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 22, 2013 at 1:47 AM Hi belated congratulations, Billy, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx Billy Simani February 26, 2013 at 10:49 PM Thank you so much Mandy... am hoping on surprising the poetry community by giving them something to think about. This is my first ever win in a poetry contest and i hope it's one among the many that are going to follow.

Seren Roberts February 21, 2013 at 6:41 PM Congrats Billy ....Seren Billy Simani February 26, 2013 at 10:47 PM Thank you Seren, thank you sooo MUCH for the support.

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2013 at 5:15 PM Hi Billy, Congratulations with your THEES and Thous, :-)..always~ LINDA Billy Simani February 26, 2013 at 10:42 PM This is more than an Honor... It's a dream come true.

Carrie Richards February 21, 2013 at 4:41 PM I love the line about overdosing on insomnia.......so clever the use of words...and the rhyme scheme is terrific! Congratulations! Billy Simani February 26, 2013 at 10:44 PM I was inspired by the best, i guess i owe it all to the poetry community as a whole. The atmosphere gives me room to grow poetically... Thanks for the comments.

Debra Squyres February 21, 2013 at 11:54 AM The repitition works in the poem .. Congrats on your win !! Billy Simani February 26, 2013 at 10:43 PM I try to think outside the box once in a while and i guess this time it worked. Thanks for the support.

John Oluoch February 15, 2013 at 4:03 AM Just wondering are the commas necessary? But I like the poem.