Be Sweet and Young

People do not like
characterless one
Nature does not like
the old and aged….

New leaves grow in the trees
After the winter, in the spring
various flowers bloom
many birds sing……

People do not like sour
If it is even a grape
Men do not like a soldier
If he is not brave…..

Our societies do not like
the sour and old
So be sweet and young
and be brave.......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/14/2015 8:04:00 PM
sweet win...Linda
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:41:00 PM
nice win. SKAT
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Date: 5/10/2015 4:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the Jadazzle United contest. I am sorry Darren wasn't around to do the final judging with me :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/11/2015 10:30:00 PM
MUHAMMAD:) :) :) I smile at every entry in this contest.. Congratulations, on your #1 placement. Always & Forever *LINDA*
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Date: 1/11/2015 4:39:00 AM
Many congrats on a fine win,
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Date: 1/10/2015 2:10:00 PM
many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 8/20/2014 10:01:00 AM
Mohammad, congratulations with your winning poem... Always~ Linda
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Date: 8/20/2014 6:06:00 AM
Congrats on this well deserved win,
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Date: 8/19/2014 9:33:00 PM
How about the old and sweet? There are some of those. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/19/2014 1:45:00 PM
Hey Everyone! When I said 'Off you go now' I didn't know you were totally going to blow my mind, not all of you at once! I am honored to have read your poetry. Thank You for entering my contest! Off You Go Now, Judy
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Date: 5/29/2014 6:17:00 PM
Hi Mohammad,,, Double Congrats on Carolyn’s birthday contest. Many smiles, on its future feature in her birthday booklet. XOX~ Linda
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Mohammad
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Date: 5/26/2014 8:47:00 PM
Mohammad, Congratulations, in Carolyn's "Birthday and Aging Humor" contest. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/26/2014 5:04:00 PM
Dear Mohammad, Congratulations on your win and thanks for participating in a contest to wish some special ladies happy birthday. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/24/2014 11:35:00 AM
Mohammad; This is beautiful. I Am brave and sometimes sweet, but how I wish I could stay young. Great poem, thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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