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Be Still

Words artfully penned Find a target—be still There is your Haiku

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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J.W. Earnings
Date: 7/7/2023 8:22:00 PM
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Simply brilliant and clever!
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Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 5/12/2016 8:32:00 PM
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Clever & witty.
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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 12/19/2011 9:41:00 PM
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Dear Laura, I see Kenny only Wrote one comment to You, I asked him to write One a day while I was in Hospital Sorry He is Young, He wrote all the Blogs I asked him to write and He is a Member of the SOUP now Thanks to Natalie The Rogue Rhymer I Like this Haiku Very Clever I just got home today and have been on the Soup for 4 hours I'm tired I will talk with YOU again Tomorrow LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 12/6/2011 1:26:00 AM
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Laura, my name is kenny, Harry(HG) is my Exec Chef. If You do not know that Chef went in for Lung Surgery last week benine a tumur a little bigger than a golf ball. You have a pleasant sense of humor. i bow to you, for such a clever; Haiku. kenny
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Jonas L. Rozario
Date: 7/1/2011 3:18:00 PM
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Sorry Laura.... sometimes my computer acts really weird.
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Jonas L. Rozario
Date: 7/1/2011 3:13:00 PM
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This is pretty cool...liked it...nice humor indeed.
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Jonas L. Rozario
Date: 7/1/2011 3:11:00 PM
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Nice humor indeed...liked it.
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Jonas L. Rozario
Date: 7/1/2011 3:10:00 PM
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Nice humor indeed....liked it.
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 7/1/2011 2:30:00 PM
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Nice expressions with nice humor to write a haiku, Laura
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