Michael Benkhen Poet Free verse

Be My Muse(Extended)

Let us write a song

write it's music,write it's words

Let us Write all day long

till the song is in our ears

till we feel it in our tears

till our heart is falling.

Let Those words exist forever,

Let those words fill our hearts with hope

So we taste it on our tongues

the embers popping from it's tune

Vibrating turns our souls askew

We've created something true

Be My Muse and help me spread it

Sending it to all with love

We created art together

Hand in hand, the sky above.

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Doris Culverhouse December 5, 2009 at 4:32 PM enjlyed reading tonight! hope you are enjoying yourself at poetry soup, we are glad to have you!

Sara Kendrick December 4, 2009 at 1:54 PM Great invite to all on soup to be your poet. Nicely done lines. You commented on my poem "Root". An onion when it comes from the store and you then store it in a dry dark place(hidden) mostly stays firm and the outter part dries out. When you take it out to prepare for food you peel away the outter layers which whole most of the onion scent inside but when peel away the outter layers the odor gets more pungent. People who are not right spiritually can somewhat hide the erring ways. Sara

Audrey Haick December 2, 2009 at 1:36 PM This is a beautiful song, Michael! Great imagery and flow! Goes to my favs! Thank you for your kind comments! Peace and love, Audrey