Be My Hero

It doesn't take much to make a day matter
Just a sweet smile or a simple hello
can make a difference 
Because every minute of every hour        
somewhere out there 
someone is in need of human's affection 
Be my hero 
More smile 
Less judging 

Hello...



Akkina 
1/22/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Baker Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 4:59 PM
I'm with you on this, Akkina. Thanks for sharing the good advice. Smiles and Hugs, my friend. Bill
Labyrinth Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 9:18 PM
Everyone needs a hero/heroes. Sometimes we have to pull up our bootstraps and be our own hero. But then when you get to thinking about it, many heroes have come to us in reality in different ages, with strong messages to deliver, through verse and books, and through stories passed down...through fiction and reality, through religion (some through great sacrifice and cost to themselves), and politics (JFK and others), through family, through friends and community. A thought provoking and deep felt poem you have written here, a strong write. xx
Labyrinth Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 9:23 PM
everyone, needs LOVE and human affection. When they do not receive it, this is where it can all go awry. If some people had different, stronger, more noble, loving peaceful nurturing heroes, perhaps there would be some salvation for them and stopping them from harming others, and becoming monsters in their own worlds of hell (a few well known ones come to mind, eg Hitler, for one).
Lamoureux Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 11:45 AM
I think you will be your best hero with a few helping hands along the way. Thanks for your visit this morning. Hugs Rick.
Downing  Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 3:23 PM
Sometimes all we need is a smile to know we exist :)
Crabtree Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 4:03 PM
Back to read this one again, Akkina. Great verse :)
Downing  Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 7:17 PM
Awe, you honored me my dear friend, thank you so much :)
Y. Avatar
January 27, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Hi Akkina, I agree the world could use more smiling and less judging indeed. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
Downing  Avatar
January 27, 2021 at 6:03 PM
Thank you dear :)
Rose  Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 12:42 PM
Hello dear, I'm smiling and all because of you. Soup mail .
Downing  Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 12:58 PM
I’m smiling for you too :)
Nicole Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 8:24 PM
"More smiling, less judging. :) Yes, I completely agree. It is the little things that matter. Simple things. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. :) Hugs, Brandy
Downing  Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 6:29 AM
And your lovely comment bring a smile to my heart. Thank you, Brandy :) hugs, Kina
Wolf Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 7:30 PM
Great sentiment. ~ Aloha, Gershon
Downing  Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 5:59 AM
Thank you, Gershon :)
Horsman Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 10:13 PM
Sweet sentiment, love the theme and the poetry, Akkina.
Downing  Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Thanks Harry :)
Jayasankar Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 4:52 AM
So true Kina... more kindness, more smile and less judgement is exactly what we need. Yes how much a simple hello or a sweet smile makes a great difference to someone somewhere always... Loved your poem my friend. Enjoy your day. Hugs ~ Ani
Downing  Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 2:05 PM
Ani, you always put a smile in my heart whenever you come by. Thank you so much :)
Proxenos Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 4:28 AM
If only there was more kindness in this world, a brief smile, a casual hello genuine kindness, our planet would be a much better place to live in
Downing  Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 2:04 PM
Yep, if only... Thanks Jennifer :)
Woodrow Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 3:16 PM
Exactly! nice one :))
Downing  Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 4:32 PM
Hello Susan :)
Crabtree Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 3:01 PM
Yes. I totally agree. A smile goes a long way :)
Downing  Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 4:31 PM
Yes it is. Thank you, Angela :)
Pandit Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 2:07 PM
Beautiful words my friend--a smile, a hello go a long way to make someone's day. Love this positive poem. Awesome upbeat ending, Akkina.
Downing  Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 2:54 PM
Hello Vijay, thanks for making me smile today with this lovely comment :)
Andresen Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 12:25 PM
- Hello ... and a smile ... it's completely free, Akkina :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Downing  Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 12:45 PM
It sure is free. And thank you Anne-Lise for making me smile :)
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