Be My Girl

Be my girl

Make me whole again. Take my love .hold my hand lets drink love
And lose ourselves into love. Girl lets for once forget about the world
And enjoy life, be my girl and I will be your boy,
Let me touch your lips they look soft and they are shiny,
Forgive me your love is to die for.

Can I at list hold you close to my chest?
I want to feel the warmth of your skin, forgive me again your beauty is irresistible.

The art that God used when he was creating you is so amazing and
It drives me crazy to be in the same world with such beautiful creature.
Girl don’t look at my face, you make me shy,

And every time I see your smile my heart eventually stops for a moment,
Your eyes are like an arrow that struck straight into my heart.

If I can stay and stir at your beauty for a while I swear I would get lost in love
Let me go before I lose myself into love more than I have already done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/18/2019 8:58:00 AM
Hello Busuma Zuma, you should read this poem to your special girl.She would enjoy this poem from your heart to her. it is romantic. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 4/18/2015 11:04:00 AM
Zuma, this is so sweet. I adore the poem. Did she say yes? Sending hugs.. SKAT
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Busani Zuma
Date: 5/9/2015 4:48:00 AM
yes she did
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