Be Mine

Be mine until the sun dies Be mine until the oceans flood Be mine until the moon falls Be mine until skies break down Be mine until my heart fails me Be mine until my soul ravels Be mine until my body cheats me Be mine until I collaborate with death Be mine beyond life itself BCause I'm yours In life & After death

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Anil Deo

Date: 4/4/2018 4:01:00 PM

Loved it ALL, Dalia. Salaamaualaikum

Dalia Shahein
Date: 6/25/2018 7:50:00 PM

Wa alaykom al salaam , I'm glad you did my dear .thank you

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/30/2017 8:00:00 PM

I have enjoyed this poem.I reread it twice.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 6/5/2017 6:02:00 PM

Thank you so much , you have no idea how much this means to me I really appreciate your words and I'm so glad that you have enjoyed it / hugs :)

White Sage

Date: 5/11/2017 1:17:00 AM

the list is awesome, having you claim such love...don't worry whatever you're asking to be yours is yours already #winks lol...beautiful write there dear

Dalia Shahein
Date: 5/11/2017 2:20:00 PM

Lol , your comments are great as always you always know how to make me laugh don't you ?! Thank you my dear friend for your beautiful words you know I appreciate it so much , hugs//:)

Phil Capitano

Date: 5/7/2017 7:56:00 AM

Great form Dalia and your words ring with such intensity to be undeniable.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 5/7/2017 10:30:00 AM

Oooh , thank you so much for these beautiful words I much appreciate it , hugs / / :)