Debbie Guzzi Poet Kyrielle

Be Merciful-.Be

From the beginning to the end tithe.
Round the circle of eternity, she writhes.
Fresh, full, ripe, and undeniably free.
O God, be merciful to she.

Fill the receptacle with riches untold.
Harvest the bounty of beauty unfold.
Lust not for love is a more precious fee.
O God, be merciful to she.

Trust in companionships hearty store
Let loose the randy and rabid bore.
Feast on the comfort of kindnesses decree.
O God, be merciful to she.

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Charlotte Watkins December 29, 2019 at 4:53 PM Elegantly written and empowering, well done! Debbie Guzzi December 30, 2019 at 3:38 PM Thank you so much Charlotte

Lee Ramage July 29, 2011 at 4:30 PM Beautiful poem. Lee

Sidney Hall Mad Poet July 29, 2011 at 4:20 PM Hey Debbie, Another beautiful poem worthy of 1st place. Tahnks for the comment, I didnt think it would be listed.

Elaine George July 29, 2011 at 9:10 AM Beautiful, Deb. Many congrats on your SUPER FIRST PLACE WIN, Lainie

Sunflower Poetess July 29, 2011 at 8:55 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win in John's contest. Really enjoyed reading your poem in this one. Thanks for sharing your most excellent poetry. Love Glenna

Sara Kendrick July 28, 2011 at 4:26 PM Congrats on your win in the contest..Sara

Kash Poet July 28, 2011 at 3:47 PM Very nice...congrats on your win.Enjoyed your poem.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair July 28, 2011 at 10:47 AM Congrats on your great win, cheers..SJ

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 27, 2011 at 6:22 PM Congrats Debbie on your first place win.. wonderful words to think on luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 27, 2011 at 2:17 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol

David Williams July 27, 2011 at 12:32 PM hey Debbie, congrats on your win, David

Nette Onclaud July 27, 2011 at 12:24 PM sublime and a real topper, debs...fireworks of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!

Dr.Ram Mehta July 27, 2011 at 11:54 AM My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, debbie

Bob Quigley July 27, 2011 at 11:31 AM Beautifully written. Congratulations

John Freeman July 27, 2011 at 11:29 AM Debbie, The sponsor receives the grace. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Tim Ryerson September 17, 2009 at 5:37 AM O God, be merciful to me too! Every word in this one fits together perfectly...beautiful flow! Tim

Raul Moreno September 15, 2009 at 1:19 AM Lovely first stanza...Raul

Brian Strand September 14, 2009 at 11:59 PM Lovely prayer Debbie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Yoni Dvorkis September 14, 2009 at 1:00 PM Love the title and how it's not quite the refrain yet carries something else in the extra 'Be' statement after Be Merciful. This one feels different, almost structured. Love the taste imagery in fresh, full, ripe, and also feasting on comfort. reading this I see a woman eating a peach, then streaming her thoughts on a keyboard about how amazing the peach tastes:) make of that what you will wise one..L&L -Yoni

Robin L. Gass September 13, 2009 at 5:58 PM This is such a lovely form, Debbie, but your words make it beautiful. BIG HUG! Love, Your wayward friend who is glad to be home!

Carol Sunshine Brown September 13, 2009 at 11:36 AM Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today Deborah. I have enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff September 13, 2009 at 5:40 AM beautiful anthem! Deb!

Sara Kendrick September 12, 2009 at 2:33 PM Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara