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Be like the bird

A flock of pelicans gather around, huddling on a treetop, bathed in moonlight, hoping safety in numbers would be found, as predators stalk prey throughout the night, when weary wings hesitate to take flight. Living in the now, these birds have no fear, each heart trusting that sol will soon appear.

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Date: 3/10/2025 3:20:00 PM
I really enjoy the picture you paint gets of the birds all joined together supporting one another
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Date: 3/10/2025 7:21:00 PM
as with most species ~ living in groups. I saw these migratory birds yesterday evening and so this poem arose :)
Date: 3/10/2025 1:02:00 PM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, I love the title of this poem. I like this poem. I think I am like the geese. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/11/2025 10:41:00 AM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, Perhaps I am a geese living in groups. The Geese always fly in groups. It is my fav. bird as well as the Dove. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 3/10/2025 7:19:00 PM
:)
Date: 3/10/2025 7:14:00 AM
I greet sol each morning, Seeker. Perhaps I'm like those pelicans. I like your lines very much.
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Date: 3/10/2025 8:02:00 AM
Thank you, Lin :)
Date: 3/10/2025 6:47:00 AM
Very nice, US:)
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Date: 3/10/2025 6:59:00 AM
Thank you, Joanna :)

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