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December.8. 2024
Couplet Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Karen Jones
~ Placed Fourth~

 

At dawn, nature glistens in sparkling dew This is the time to start our life anew Feast on the brilliance of the rising sun The marvels nature unfolds, who can shun? When you find yourself in blue or gloom Take time to watch nature in bloom The beauty around can give you delight And your soul will slowly open to light! Watch the beauty of the clean azure sky Enjoy the V formation of birds flying high Listen to the murmur of rippling streams Enjoy the warmth of sun’s kissing beams Watch the tiny specks of clouds sailing in the sky Enjoy the grandeur of mountains towering high Listen to birds singing amid fluttering leaves See the artistry of gossamer web, the spider weaves Count the bees that carry the cargo of honey Thrilled you’ll be by Nature’s magic symphony. Enjoy the dance of flowers kissed by the wind Watching them, you’ll be freed of life's grind Sit back and view nature’s delightful scenes In her lap, relax and weave lovely dreams Sure, nature can lift you into a world of magic, I swear She has such delectable potions for all our ills to cure.

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Date: 12/11/2024 4:35:00 AM
- A beautiful poem with delightful scenes from mother nature, Valsa :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 12/10/2024 12:11:00 PM
What a wonderfully written poem! It was inspiring and very engaging Valsa! I enjoyed how you used nature and involved the senses as well as the mind! You are an exceptional poet and I was honored you entered my contest! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 12/10/2024 8:07:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Karen for the high placement you gave to my poem. Also for your beautiful words of appreciation.
Date: 12/9/2024 8:06:00 AM
Dear sweet valsa, after reading this, i am blown away and in awe of the imagery youv painted in such an ethereal manner! How stunning and picturesque. And i must also highlight the artistic nature of your lines and the way youv woven alliterations too here! So beautiful! I love the way youv personified elements of nature to give and enhance the visual effects of the poem! Youv really nailed it and you are a flawless rhymer! I am sure this will do well in the contest! A fave this is! Sending you light always
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Date: 12/9/2024 6:54:00 AM
You made nature wonderful. I especially like a out the bees they say bees are dying out and they are to important to us for that to happen
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Date: 12/9/2024 6:48:00 AM
Ohhh so true, nature is the ultimate source of catharsis which can replenish our souls in every possible way! When life gives us uncountable hurdles, there's so much to learn and observe in the evergreen 'life' of nature ~ which breathes around us... There's so much to appreciate and be grateful for! Such moments are the ones which make living really worth of the efforts. Your descriptions and imagery here are absolutely enchanting, dear poetess. Lovely to read your words today, sending light. Hope you've been doing well, keep writing and shining always ~
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Date: 12/8/2024 6:48:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Valsa! The imagery in your wonderful nature poem took me there. Hugs & Smiles ~ Anne :-)
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Date: 12/8/2024 9:58:00 AM
Beautiful scenic association of daily life with nature. Loved it. Picture is awesome.
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Date: 12/8/2024 6:18:00 AM
Love it! My wife and I both love being in nature. Give me a mountain retreat over a luxury cruise line voyage anyday. I've written several true to life (mostly) haibuns about our time spent together in nature. You always do so well with any theme Valsa
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Date: 12/8/2024 4:10:00 AM
Sorry for the delay. Loved your poem ??.. Sorry but I am still very out of shape. Blessings.
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Date: 12/8/2024 3:51:00 AM
Hi Valsa tou have painted a beautiful picture of the wonders of nature, it was a pleasurable read. Good luck with the contest, my friend. Have a great day.
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Date: 12/8/2024 2:50:00 AM
Lovely thoughts penned about the beauty that we see around us all the time but sometimes we miss what God has in store for us because we are busy making a living or doing things that keeps our eyes down. Thanks for sharing this one with us today. Sara K
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Date: 12/8/2024 2:26:00 AM
Nothing beats being at one with nature Valsa, there's so much beauty all around us. Tom
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