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Be Happy With What You Have

Once a crow lived in the forest and
was absolutely satisfied in life.
One day, as he paced back and forth
his form flickering like flame,
saw a swan that was so white.
He asked the swan, “ why I am so black 
and you are so  white?". 
Swan replied him that he thought himself
so until he saw a parrot with two colors.
The crow then approached a parrot.
The parrot explained that he was happy
till he show the multiple colored peacock

The crow visited a peacock in the zoo
and saw him surrounded by hundreds of people.
When the people left, the crow said,
“You are so beautiful , everyday people
come to see and enjoy your beauty,
while people shoo me away as they see me".
The peacock replied, “Beauty and color
are the reasons why I’m entrapped in the zoo.
You are the only bird never kept in a cage.
I wish I were a crow happily roaming everywhere".

We want what we don’t have it and
are trapped in the vicious circle of sadness

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October 21, 2014
Form : Free Verse
First Place Win
Contest: Fable to the rescue by Carol Eastman
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Shines Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 11:26 AM
First of all congratulations !!! well deserved .I just loved your poem,dont know how to tell you,how much i liked it.No words.
Johnson Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 8:06 PM
So very true and so foolish. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 6:56 PM
Dr. Ram, congratulations on your win for this great fable with a wonderful moral. Sandra
Yvonne Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 11:50 AM
Best moral of any story. Great reminder Dr. Mehta to be thankful for what you have. Congratulations on your fine win.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Dr. Mehta
Lamoureux Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 7:09 PM
What a fantastic tale! Bravo and congratulations Dr. Ram.
Taylor Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Great fable Dr Mehta. Congrats. Enjoyed. Ralph
Kayode Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 11:41 AM
A good Story for everybody to learn from...congrats on the win...huggs
Rv Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 9:20 AM
Very nice poem with a very nice moral!
Wash Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 3:03 AM
This sounds like a winner to me Dr. Ram I can hear the bell ringing and the people saying "Let freedom ring!"
Babcock Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 4:33 PM
A fable with an excellent message. love phyl
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 4:29 PM
wow, GREAT fable, Dr. Ram. A sure win.
Thomas Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Beautiful message to put across... brought a smile to my lips... Excellent write :)
Helppi Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 12:13 AM
Nice!
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 3:55 PM
Wonderful fable!
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 1:54 PM
wonderful wise words Dr Mehta:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 12:55 PM
Sometimes it is good to look around so you can see how blessed you are. Thanks for sharing this wise story Dr. Mehta.
De La Luna Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 10:00 AM
i like the wisdom in your words, Dr. Ram. nice flow, too. glad i read it today
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