Be Happy With What You Have

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Once a crow lived in the forest and
was absolutely satisfied in life.
One day, as he paced back and forth
his form flickering like flame,
saw a swan that was so white.
He asked the swan, “ why I am so black 
and you are so  white?". 
Swan replied him that he thought himself
so until he saw a parrot with two colors.
The crow then approached a parrot.
The parrot explained that he was happy
till he show the multiple colored peacock

The crow visited a peacock in the zoo
and saw him surrounded by hundreds of people.
When the people left, the crow said,
“You are so beautiful , everyday people
come to see and enjoy your beauty,
while people shoo me away as they see me".
The peacock replied, “Beauty and color
are the reasons why I’m entrapped in the zoo.
You are the only bird never kept in a cage.
I wish I were a crow happily roaming everywhere".

We want what we don’t have it and
are trapped in the vicious circle of sadness

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October 21, 2014
Form : Free Verse
First Place Win
Contest: Fable to the rescue by Carol Eastman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/29/2014 11:26:00 AM
First of all congratulations !!! well deserved .I just loved your poem,dont know how to tell you,how much i liked it.No words.
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Date: 11/19/2014 8:06:00 PM
So very true and so foolish. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/19/2014 6:56:00 PM
Dr. Ram, congratulations on your win for this great fable with a wonderful moral. Sandra
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Date: 11/19/2014 11:50:00 AM
Best moral of any story. Great reminder Dr. Mehta to be thankful for what you have. Congratulations on your fine win.
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Date: 11/19/2014 9:51:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Dr. Mehta
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Date: 11/18/2014 7:09:00 PM
What a fantastic tale! Bravo and congratulations Dr. Ram.
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Date: 11/18/2014 3:27:00 PM
Great fable Dr Mehta. Congrats. Enjoyed. Ralph
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:41:00 AM
A good Story for everybody to learn from...congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 11/6/2014 9:20:00 AM
Very nice poem with a very nice moral!
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Date: 11/3/2014 3:03:00 AM
This sounds like a winner to me Dr. Ram I can hear the bell ringing and the people saying "Let freedom ring!"
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Date: 10/23/2014 4:33:00 PM
A fable with an excellent message. love phyl
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Date: 10/22/2014 4:29:00 PM
wow, GREAT fable, Dr. Ram. A sure win.
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Date: 10/22/2014 9:18:00 AM
Beautiful message to put across... brought a smile to my lips... Excellent write :)
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Date: 10/22/2014 12:13:00 AM
Nice!
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Date: 10/21/2014 3:55:00 PM
Wonderful fable!
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Date: 10/21/2014 1:54:00 PM
wonderful wise words Dr Mehta:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/21/2014 12:55:00 PM
Sometimes it is good to look around so you can see how blessed you are. Thanks for sharing this wise story Dr. Mehta.
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Date: 10/21/2014 10:00:00 AM
i like the wisdom in your words, Dr. Ram. nice flow, too. glad i read it today
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