Notes About The Poem

The tunnel I mentioned is in Tablet IX of the Epic of Gilgamesh.

Be Genuine

If to move you, my soul must listen to
What the readers of epic stories like.
I know that, through the jungle, I should hike
And skin an indigo snake for your shoes.

I know I should learn how to fight a bull.
I know I should defy my fierce quarry
In the arena, win fame and glory 
To earn your hand after the spectacle.

I have no hero skills. I need the route
Of this tunnel guarded by scorpion men
To walk twenty-four hours and, after the den,
In the Garden of Eden, pick a fruit.

But can the fruit be my simplicity
To gain your passion and felicity?
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Empress Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 1:24 AM
Ah so good to see you entered my contest my island poet! I absolutely love what you did with the prompt! You took a very unique approach, i cant help but love especially the couplet “But can the fruit be my simplicity To gain your passion and felicity?” Thank you for supporting my contest! This is a fave. Sending you light always
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May 15, 2026 at 5:30 AM
You are most welcome. I'm glad you appreciated my participation and my writing. Thank you for the information about your contest.
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