Be Free

(Note: Special thanks to my cousin Joel Sumilang, whose butterfly 
painting inspired me to write this poem.)
 
 
 
Be Free 
(Joy Ditching-Lorico)
(Manila, 6 September 2009, 11:00pm)
 
In God’s little garden, wildflowers grow
Beauty meets the eyes, wind starts to blow
Bushy plants with translucent dots
Serrated leaves amidst yellow spots
 
Brilliant sun casts rays on the meadow
A winged little creature crawling so low
God watches as it flutters and stalls
Wonders why it tries and still falls
 
Looking closely God sees why
This dainty beauty seems to cry
For both wings appear quite strong
But there must be something wrong
 
From a chrysalis the beauty emerges
Already done with life’s rapid changes
Complete metamorphosis has come
The world outside beckons a welcome
 
But winged creature is still trapped
In a cocooned life that was mapped
Fears and doubts fill the heart
Flying high can’t seem to start
 
So God whispered in the wind to say
Go, my beauty please don’t stay
Trapped in your past day and night
Never fear and go see the light
 
For I love you so, my dear
Don’t be imprisoned by fear
It is your mind that holds you back
For something that you don’t lack
 
Winged little creature sighed
For quite some time it cried
With courage wings started flapping
Buoyed by wind butterfly began flying
 
God watched as His butterfly soar
His dainty little creature no more
He whispered into the air a plea
Go, my child, and BE FREE!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/17/2024 7:34:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/23/2016 12:27:00 PM
enjoying this one again, Josefa. LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 4:07:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one again. SKAT
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Date: 6/29/2013 4:05:00 PM
Josefa, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers. Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. Hope you meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop by and say hello. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2013 10:33:00 PM
Hello Elvira, heartfelt... enjoyed dropping by :-) -WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side. Hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda"
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Josefa Elvira Lorico
Date: 6/28/2013 12:34:00 AM
Thank you, Linda, for dropping by and for inviting me to your latest contest. Though, being new here, I'm still trying to figure out what these contests are all about. Maybe discovering PoetrySoup by chance is like finding a new home for expressing my thoughts about anything and everything. Looking forward to reading your poems...glad to have my first poet friend here :-)
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