Be Careful Daughter

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Poetry/Quatrain/Be Careful Daughter
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1655-160-22
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, June 22, 2024
For the Contest, BiteSize Poem, No. 86
Sponsor Line Gauthier

Mother Daughter Beach Babes Painting by Vickie Wade - Fine Art America

Waves are crashing on a white sandy shore, as sea gulls drift, float over waves then soar; I touch the cool aquamarine water ... my mother's whisper, "be careful daughter. "

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David Crandall

Date: 6/25/2024 3:46:00 PM

I can see the waves and drifting gulls, the waves, and water. My favorite part is your mother's whisper - which really means something - great poem Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2024 7:38:00 PM

David, thank you for the compliment, appreciate, Constance

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/23/2024 9:01:00 AM

Beautifully written. Smooth to read. Well done :)

Constance La France
Date: 6/24/2024 5:52:00 AM

Heidi, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, Constance

Mat Ignacio

Date: 6/22/2024 9:31:00 PM

i like this - there is a weight to it, something palpable

Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2024 4:32:00 AM

Mat, thank you for the comment and compliment, that is exactly what I wanted readers to feel, Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/22/2024 12:04:00 PM

What a lovely write with a great beach picture. A wonderful ending. Yes, "be careful daughter." "Good Luck" in the contest. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................

Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2024 4:33:00 AM

Paula, thank you for the compliment and comment, I love the picture too, Constance