Constance La France Poet Quatrain

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Poetry/Quatrain/Be Careful Daughter
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1655-160-22
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, June 22, 2024
For the Contest, BiteSize Poem, No. 86
Sponsor Line Gauthier

Be Careful Daughter

 

Waves are crashing on a white sandy shore,
as sea gulls drift, float over waves then soar;
I touch the cool aquamarine water ... 
my mother's whisper, "be careful daughter. "

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David Crandall June 25, 2024 at 3:46 PM I can see the waves and drifting gulls, the waves, and water. My favorite part is your mother's whisper - which really means something - great poem Constance! Constance La France June 26, 2024 at 7:38 PM David, thank you for the compliment, appreciate, Constance

Heidi Sands June 23, 2024 at 9:01 AM Beautifully written. Smooth to read. Well done :) Constance La France June 24, 2024 at 5:52 AM Heidi, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, Constance

Paula Goldsmith June 22, 2024 at 12:04 PM What a lovely write with a great beach picture. A wonderful ending. Yes, "be careful daughter." "Good Luck" in the contest. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................. Constance La France June 23, 2024 at 4:33 AM Paula, thank you for the compliment and comment, I love the picture too, Constance