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Be Assertive Before You Indulge

Be assertive before you indulge
Tangy, 
sugary, 
sweating,
like Chinese Sweet and Sour.
'Tis a fling? 
Or a zesty, 
savory,
full blown love affair?
Remember!
It has an after taste that never goes away.
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Chante Reeves

November 6, 2015 at 5:42 PM

it has an after taste that never goes away... be assertive before you indulge love this! i particularly enjoy poems, short sweet to the point.. thanks for sharing! =)

A. Juman

November 12, 2015 at 6:49 PM

Sorry Miss, my father in not allowed to publish poems or email anyone on this site. If he does I will have my uncle put him on one of the slowest tug in the fleet. Then he will only see land one day a week. It seem he don't like it at home any more.

A. Juman

November 10, 2015 at 1:30 PM

Chante--Thank you I don't know how I miss you. thank you very, very much --I think I posted a new one after that . again forgive me

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

November 5, 2015 at 8:45 PM

Excellent poem. I enjoyed it very much.

A. Juman

November 6, 2015 at 4:23 AM

Thank you much Nayda happy that you like it

Afolabi Muideen

October 29, 2015 at 6:02 AM

Hello dear Zaladin, I have already wanted to ask for another post from you, it's just that I am reluctant to do so. Your brilliant piece appears voluptuously and made savor it flavour. A seductive piece indeed.......................A.M.

A. Juman

October 29, 2015 at 7:32 PM

Thank you my friend--Glad you like it. I wrote 10 in the last week but my son took 9 and give me one. Of course the one he don't want. So how was the poem you entered in the contest? Al

Ralph Sergi

October 28, 2015 at 6:56 AM

Simply beautiful with a final metaphoric message. May I suggest you examine all the poem forms in the contest and take a poetic stab. Don't let the N/A dissuade you. Poetry is a great release after awhile.

A. Juman

October 28, 2015 at 9:27 AM

Appreciate that Ralph--it just that I write and try to get it over with. So searching to describe is monotonous since most of what I write has so many variants. I once wrote a piece for a Doctor and showed it around to get ideas of its impression. Instead I got 10 different interpretation. Then when I gave it to the doctor he had a completely different analyst. But I try to spend a little or ask around to categorize.

Dalia Shahein

October 28, 2015 at 4:09 AM

Beautiful poem my friend, I enjoyed reading it.....

A. Juman

October 28, 2015 at 7:55 PM

Sorry Ralph-- I made a typo it should have been I will try to ask around to get advice. But I think I did not understand what you were trying to tell me to examine the form of the contests. Forgive me but I really really cant read well. I did Romeo and Juliet in high school and I read only 6 pages.

A. Juman

October 28, 2015 at 5:03 AM

Much obliged Dalia-- Like you like that

Skat A

October 27, 2015 at 9:20 PM

A. Z., Ha so true. But, I love Tangy from savory all the way. Hello to a love affair. LOL... SKAT

A. Juman

October 27, 2015 at 9:32 PM

Tell me how I hate myself for writing this kind of stuff. Never know what tomorrow stores for us so it good to keep the imagination fresh even if it tangles us in a web