Be a Friend

Softly
Gently
Let us be warm and friendly.

Curious
But cautious
Happiness is much too precious.

Marveling
Wondering 
What days ahead will bring.

Softly
Gently
Let us be warm and friendly.



12 November 2014

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/31/2015 11:03:00 PM

Yes i saw how open is your heart, and that is god bless you such a nice thing, however what prince So If I can get rid of Prince Jim, who knows? LOL teasing and big hugs

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/31/2015 10:46:00 PM

Now that I read this again, I am sad that I dont have the address for your heart!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/8/2015 10:53:00 AM

ok can I have your address? be right over!!! What a sweet beautiful first poem!

Jack Ellison

Date: 5/5/2015 9:33:00 PM

WHATTA A BEGINNING!!! Love ya dear Kimmie, hugs Santa xxx

Noel Villarosa

Date: 4/19/2015 2:05:00 AM

The art of writing poetry can be in a form as you would like it. It is nice you joined poetrysoup, sure you will have more time to reflect here and share more inspiring poems. A lovely read of this poem. Welcome kabayan. (^_^) Noel.

Cynthia Jones

Date: 4/6/2015 8:28:00 PM

Kim, this is an excellent first write for the soup. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. A 7. *S* Cynthia

Cynthia Jones
Date: 4/13/2015 5:23:00 PM

:O) You are most welcome Kim. I know you do. ~HUGS~ and *smiles* back. *S* Cynthia

Tonytocaa Camacho

Date: 4/2/2015 4:25:00 PM

A gentle whisper of a poem,about special friendship I enjoyed this very much,TonyTocaa

Jake Ponce

Date: 3/17/2015 10:14:00 PM

Simple. Inviting. Charming. If set to music, can tame even the wildest beast.

Paul Schneiter

Date: 3/4/2015 3:02:00 PM

I confess to loving this. It is as soft and gentle as the scene it describes. Exceptional!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/19/2015 10:52:00 PM

Love it, Kim! I particularly love the second stanza! Lovely first poem! Rally enjoyed reading this tonight! Always, Laura

Kp Nunez
Date: 2/20/2015 12:56:00 AM

Thank you Laura my friend, for the visit and your lovely comment. I must admit this is not my actual first poem. I used to write back in high school and university days. However, I have abandoned my muse in the hustle and bustle of city life, sucked in the rat race. Last November, I felt an overwhelming compulsion to write again. My muse returned, ever forgiving. Together we have made tentative steps into the world of words and rhymes and senses and thoughts and feelings. Thank you for being part of my journey. Hugs and smiles. :D Kim

Robert Nehls

Date: 2/14/2015 8:28:00 AM

Hi Kim. This is such a great first posting for you. Happiness is precious and friendship is fragile yet made of the strongest character traits that God has to give. May God always lead us in our friendships. Thanks for this wonderful poem, my friend..... Robert.

Kp Nunez
Date: 2/14/2015 9:16:00 AM

A pleasure to see you on my page, Robert. Thanks for your lovely comments and acceptance of the offer. Friendship is indeed a fragile yet lasting gift if given proper care and value. May God be glorified in our friendships. Friendly smiles from the land of thousand isles...:D Kim

Paul Callus

Date: 2/14/2015 6:07:00 AM

Hi Kim! I just stumbled on this sweet, cute poem...very enjoyable, especially your sincere offer for friendship. Glad to have met you...hope to see you again! All the best and have a happy Valentine's Day. // paul

Vicki Acquah

Date: 2/5/2015 1:19:00 PM

The comment you left me compelled me to want "come be your friend today" and then I read this very sweet poem- and decided to do so.! much love and light, thank you. Vicki Acquah

John Fleming

Date: 2/1/2015 11:23:00 AM

A truly lovely little poem, Kim. :) john.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/29/2015 7:50:00 AM

This is a warm invitation, I accept.

Asiimwe Simon

Date: 12/8/2014 2:54:00 AM

its all you can give to a friend, i liked it, felt it deep from the core of my heart.

Kp Nunez
Date: 12/8/2014 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Simon, for dropping by. Glad you felt its meaning. God bless you! Kim Patrice :)

Hija De La Luna

Date: 12/4/2014 3:22:00 AM

what an inviting write, Kim! i love it!

Kp Nunez
Date: 12/4/2014 7:15:00 AM

Thank you, O dear Daughter of the Moon! I'm glad you answered to its call. Certainly would return the gesture and visit your page soon! Kim Patrice ;)