Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Bb's Rattle

BB's really rattle in the shell
Of a container,loose like bell
Clapper, hanging free to ding
Ideas rattle in poet's brain to ring

The audience, and awake from sleep
Oh! Into a new dimension of deep
Thoughts, understanding of heights above
The ordinary, into a new realm of love  (truth)


(Thank you Lord for your blesssings on me.)

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Gert W. Knop November 3, 2009 at 12:59 AM Very nicely written, Sara! Keep your pen flowing. Kind regards, Gert

Izzy Gumbo November 2, 2009 at 10:11 PM omg Sara, this is wonderful! I love it and it flows with brilliance. :) Thank you for your visit and kind comments, I've edited Mustard Seeds... if you have a chance would love to know your thoughts. Many hugs :)

Pamela Griffiths November 2, 2009 at 2:40 PM Nice poem, enjoyed reading this. Pam.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 2, 2009 at 2:36 PM Beautiful, Sara, excellent write.. and your message and footnote... we should all thank the Lord each day for His Blessings on us all... thankxxx Linda-Marie

Doris Culverhouse November 2, 2009 at 2:31 PM rattle on, bb brain-just kidding, mom-love you!

Carolyn Devonshire November 2, 2009 at 12:54 PM I really like to comparison of the BBs rattling in a shell to the ideas that rattle in a poet's brain. Very clever, Sara! Love, Carolyn