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Bay Area Nigh December

Bay Area Nigh December A tryst on a San Francisco trolley that exhibits penchant amidst a glance, for 'tis wintry time launch all, too jolly save two turtledoves, culled cooed romance left in steep devotion, neglects folly. Atone solemn occasions ere chapel doors left open, soul worshippers pass stained glass multicolored figurines, dapple its windows amidst Christmasy lights, trained eyes in wonder, gulp an adam's apple. Snowflakes patterned distinctly, blankets bare grounds painstakingly, changing verdant green to an achromatic dressed whitewash wear, rotating perspective picturesque scene consistent seasons shift that we now fare. The Golden Gate bridge, waning its glit of citrus rising, squirting into blind eyes forced to shades, now visibly shone 'twas love delicate trace of your countenance guise as it chalks a blackboard wrote from above. 2020 November 14 *8th Place* Quintain-Sicilian ~~Emile Pinet
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Logan Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 2:58 PM
San Francisco is one of my favorite cites, and you've highlighted some of it's most amazing features in your winning lines. Congratulations, William.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 3:56 PM
Thank you, Jenna, I am glad that we agree about San Francisco as being one of the favorite cities, beautiful all around, thanks again, Aloha!
Allison Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 2:55 PM
I would love to visit the US and see San Francisco for real. love the imagery William many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 3:06 PM
Thank you, Jan, though I may have left more than my heart there, like one of the kids and her family--I'm sure that it will be memorable, my friend, Aloha!
Kauffman Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 11:05 AM
Congratulations William on your win! Your imagery is lush with the richness of your scenery. San Francisco is a great backdrop for your words! Aloha my friend!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 11:52 AM
Thank you, Sam, as 'twas home once upon a time, though cold, it never snowed there in all my years in the bay area, thanks again my friend, Aloha!
Pinet Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 8:37 AM
Congratulations William, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, well done my friend, Emile.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 9:26 AM
Thank you, Emile, for the opportunity and placement, Aloha!
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November 14, 2020 at 10:59 AM
A beautiful Quintain (Sicilian ) William. Love the poem and moving picture, good luck for the contest... Belle
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 7:21 PM
Many thanks, Belle, I was inspired by yours -- looks like a winner, best wishes to you too my friend, Aloha!
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