Battling Addiction

You have been sober for two years three days and six hours
still the battle has not ended
The temptress in that bottle calls out in the dark
Beckoning you to return
The times when life seems more than you can bear
There was a time she seemed to satisfy
she caressed you from the inside
Until you started to choke
Everything that mattered was taken away
family, friends, job
You still can't breathe without thinking of her
they say it's one day at a time
will it ever get easier
four years 
maybe five
Perhaps ten
Thankfully you do not surrender
you have battled too far
the worst is behind you
Battling addiction is a moment by moment affair
Friends were left on that battlefield
those friends didn't want you to win
misery truly does love company
New friends have been gained
family has taken you back with open arms
they never truly left
You had chosen to do the leaving
she had held you in her grip
no one else could be seen or heard
This time you are back to stay
You are the victor
In the end you are stronger than her

Written by Richard Lamoureux
I have broken the twenty four line rule, submitted and old poem to boot, on top of that it doesn't fully conform to your request. You  strike me as a person who doesn't follow the rules, so hopefully you will forgive me and break your own rules by placing this piece. ;0)
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Kimathi Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 3:55 PM
Greetings Richard. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Hamilton Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Congrats on your fine win, broken rules and all.I'm constantly amazed by our parallel lives, my mom doesn't drink sober for 45 years, my dad well you know, glad I was so turned off of drinking, it never was my thing.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 8:53 AM
I am thankful that is the case for both of us.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 10:34 AM
I'm glad you broke the rule! this is a wonderful write and cutting down lines would be awful! :D Congrats. Sunita
Lamoureux Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 8:54 AM
I thought what better contest to do that for. Thanks Sunita.
Kent Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Congrats on the win!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Thanks Ron.
May Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Congrats on your win ...to win the battle you have to leave some "friends' behind...
Lamoureux Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Thanks Joseph, sad but true.
Smith Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 11:09 AM
We all forgive you Richard and are better for the read...
Lamoureux Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Ha ha, thanks Charlie.
Y. Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Hi Richard, Addiction is not just hard for the one addicted, It can be devastating for the whole family. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor. P.S ,This was a rule to be broken:-) Alexis
Lamoureux Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 10:23 AM
Ha ha, thanks. I couldn't resist;0)
Dutta Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Congrats Richard to win even breaking the Rule
Lamoureux Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 10:02 AM
Thanks Anisha!
Chansarkar Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Fighting addiction is a reality most have dealt with at some time,in a friend or a relative and its painful.Absolutely loved it Richard!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Thanks Sara.;0)
Nance Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 9:02 PM
Addiction is challenge. I think I have been becoming addicted to your poetry. Seriously, I love that you have such diverse topics and styles. and this I can feel it, I know that struggle, not with alchol but you know, hey it is always good to remember your strengths. hugs my friend
Ober Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:59 AM
Oh, WOW. Now this - this is an incredibly powerful poem. Anne will be blown away by this one.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 7:00 AM
Thanks Heather
Trifiatis Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:54 AM
FANTASTIQUE MON AMI!! Excellent writing superbly expressed and for such noble a purpose! Certainly you deserve the best!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:58 AM
You have excellent taste my friend. We have to find ways to stay warm *lol*
Ellison Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:39 AM
My only addition is the "craze" of the moment! Today it's poetry... tomorrow??? Guess I shouldn't complain, no substance abuse in my family that I'm aware of! An excellent write, Rick!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:55 AM
Fortunate for me my mom is the stable one, I guess the ying to my dads yang. I never seen her drink but my dad drank enough for both of them and gave us all a perpetual hangover.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:52 AM
Thanks Jack
Duncan Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 10:19 PM
Love it,, awesome write Richard,,, no addiction here, ever. Thank God,,,, though I've known a few in my family. That might be why I was strong enough. Or maybe I just took after my mom.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:56 AM
See my response to you above, it went in the wrong spot.
Widjanarko Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 7:00 PM
Hello Survivor :D this one really touched me, some parts reminds me of many things behind :) glad to read this beautiful piece of work in my morning, your afternoon :) , wishing you a wonderful day too :) - hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 7:33 PM
I survived growing up in that family but fortunately never had to battle substance abuse, I chose to keep my distance.
Jordan Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 2:24 PM
Good for you. Me too... J
Lamoureux Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 2:59 PM
Hi Jack I come from a family where substance abuse was a part of every day. Thankfully I was not dragged down that dark hole, but I do have intimate knowledge of what a destructive force Alcohol and drugs can be. I applaude your recovery Jack. I am so happy for you.
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