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Battling Addiction

You have been sober for two years three days and six hours still the battle has not ended The temptress in that bottle calls out in the dark Beckoning you to return The times when life seems more than you can bear There was a time she seemed to satisfy she caressed you from the inside Until you started to choke Everything that mattered was taken away family, friends, job You still can't breathe without thinking of her they say it's one day at a time will it ever get easier four years maybe five Perhaps ten Thankfully you do not surrender you have battled too far the worst is behind you Battling addiction is a moment by moment affair Friends were left on that battlefield those friends didn't want you to win misery truly does love company New friends have been gained family has taken you back with open arms they never truly left You had chosen to do the leaving she had held you in her grip no one else could be seen or heard This time you are back to stay You are the victor In the end you are stronger than her Written by Richard Lamoureux I have broken the twenty four line rule, submitted and old poem to boot, on top of that it doesn't fully conform to your request. You strike me as a person who doesn't follow the rules, so hopefully you will forgive me and break your own rules by placing this piece. ;0)

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Date: 8/16/2016 3:55:00 PM
Greetings Richard. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/13/2016 2:33:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, broken rules and all.I'm constantly amazed by our parallel lives, my mom doesn't drink sober for 45 years, my dad well you know, glad I was so turned off of drinking, it never was my thing.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2016 8:53:00 AM
I am thankful that is the case for both of us.
Date: 8/13/2016 10:34:00 AM
I'm glad you broke the rule! this is a wonderful write and cutting down lines would be awful! :D Congrats. Sunita
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2016 8:54:00 AM
I thought what better contest to do that for. Thanks Sunita.
Date: 8/13/2016 9:49:00 AM
Congrats on the win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Ron.
Date: 8/12/2016 2:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win ...to win the battle you have to leave some "friends' behind...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2016 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, sad but true.
Date: 8/12/2016 11:09:00 AM
We all forgive you Richard and are better for the read...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2016 8:55:00 AM
Ha ha, thanks Charlie.
Date: 8/12/2016 10:17:00 AM
Hi Richard, Addiction is not just hard for the one addicted, It can be devastating for the whole family. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor. P.S ,This was a rule to be broken:-) Alexis
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/12/2016 10:23:00 AM
Ha ha, thanks. I couldn't resist;0)
Date: 8/12/2016 8:54:00 AM
Congrats Richard to win even breaking the Rule
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/12/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thanks Anisha!
Date: 8/12/2016 8:54:00 AM
Fighting addiction is a reality most have dealt with at some time,in a friend or a relative and its painful.Absolutely loved it Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/12/2016 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Sara.;0)
Date: 6/26/2014 9:02:00 PM
Addiction is challenge. I think I have been becoming addicted to your poetry. Seriously, I love that you have such diverse topics and styles. and this I can feel it, I know that struggle, not with alchol but you know, hey it is always good to remember your strengths. hugs my friend
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Date: 2/21/2013 6:59:00 AM
Oh, WOW. Now this - this is an incredibly powerful poem. Anne will be blown away by this one.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/21/2013 7:00:00 AM
Thanks Heather
Date: 2/21/2013 6:54:00 AM
FANTASTIQUE MON AMI!! Excellent writing superbly expressed and for such noble a purpose! Certainly you deserve the best!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/21/2013 6:58:00 AM
You have excellent taste my friend. We have to find ways to stay warm *lol*
Date: 2/21/2013 6:39:00 AM
My only addition is the "craze" of the moment! Today it's poetry... tomorrow??? Guess I shouldn't complain, no substance abuse in my family that I'm aware of! An excellent write, Rick!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/21/2013 6:55:00 AM
Fortunate for me my mom is the stable one, I guess the ying to my dads yang. I never seen her drink but my dad drank enough for both of them and gave us all a perpetual hangover.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/21/2013 6:52:00 AM
Thanks Jack
Date: 2/20/2013 10:19:00 PM
Love it,, awesome write Richard,,, no addiction here, ever. Thank God,,,, though I've known a few in my family. That might be why I was strong enough. Or maybe I just took after my mom.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/21/2013 6:56:00 AM
See my response to you above, it went in the wrong spot.
Date: 2/20/2013 7:56:00 PM
Your hitting me where it hurts.I've got one day.that's cause I'm broke.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/20/2013 8:21:00 PM
Well, it's a start. I hope you are kidding, if not I feel for you. It's not an easy road.
Date: 2/20/2013 7:00:00 PM
Hello Survivor :D this one really touched me, some parts reminds me of many things behind :) glad to read this beautiful piece of work in my morning, your afternoon :) , wishing you a wonderful day too :) - hug, yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/20/2013 7:33:00 PM
I survived growing up in that family but fortunately never had to battle substance abuse, I chose to keep my distance.
Date: 2/20/2013 2:24:00 PM
Good for you. Me too... J
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/20/2013 2:59:00 PM
Hi Jack I come from a family where substance abuse was a part of every day. Thankfully I was not dragged down that dark hole, but I do have intimate knowledge of what a destructive force Alcohol and drugs can be. I applaude your recovery Jack. I am so happy for you.

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