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Battleship

a battleship sits
stubbornly in a bottle...
fire cannon one_crash 

Inspired by A Poet Destroyer
Contest: One Solo Epic Senryu or Haiku: In A Bottle
Written: July 22, 2014

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Dr.Ram Mehta

August 21, 2014 at 4:50 AM

Congrats on your deserved win. sara

Robert Lindley

August 20, 2014 at 9:54 PM

A very nice one. Congrats on your great win my friend!!

Mark Trichet

August 20, 2014 at 9:07 PM

Great Senryu Sarah. Even down to the formatting...Congrats

Scott Thirtyseven

August 20, 2014 at 8:01 PM

Hearty chuckle. Great piece, deserved winner.

Tim Smith

August 20, 2014 at 5:54 PM

nice one...congrats

Casarah Nance

August 20, 2014 at 5:24 PM

Clever! I enjoyed this one :) grats on your first place :)

Andrea Dietrich

August 20, 2014 at 3:05 PM

Nice win and big congratulations. It's so weird how they got them in a bottle that way.

Pandita Sietesantos

August 20, 2014 at 10:57 AM

Congratulations on a superb TOP of the class win! Pandita

D.W. Rodgers

August 20, 2014 at 9:45 AM

Blew me away - congrats on your win

Paul Callus

August 20, 2014 at 9:41 AM

Ohhh this is smashing!! like your take on this bottle theme! Congratulations on a top win. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

August 20, 2014 at 9:28 AM

Sara, LOL, This one had my attention, from the get go. HEhehehe! Hope the cannon pays off. :) Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~