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Battleship

a battleship sits
stubbornly in a bottle...
fire cannon one_crash 

Inspired by A Poet Destroyer
Contest: One Solo Epic Senryu or Haiku: In A Bottle
Written: July 22, 2014

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2014

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Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/21/2014 4:50:00 AM Congrats on your deserved win. sara Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 8/20/2014 9:54:00 PM A very nice one. Congrats on your great win my friend!! Login to Reply

Mark Trichet Date: 8/20/2014 9:07:00 PM Great Senryu Sarah. Even down to the formatting...Congrats Login to Reply

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 8/20/2014 8:01:00 PM Hearty chuckle. Great piece, deserved winner. Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 8/20/2014 5:54:00 PM nice one...congrats Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 8/20/2014 5:24:00 PM Clever! I enjoyed this one :) grats on your first place :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/20/2014 3:05:00 PM Nice win and big congratulations. It's so weird how they got them in a bottle that way. Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 8/20/2014 10:57:00 AM Congratulations on a superb TOP of the class win! Pandita Login to Reply

D.W. Rodgers Date: 8/20/2014 9:45:00 AM Blew me away - congrats on your win Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 8/20/2014 9:41:00 AM Ohhh this is smashing!! like your take on this bottle theme! Congratulations on a top win. // paul Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/20/2014 9:28:00 AM Sara, LOL, This one had my attention, from the get go. HEhehehe! Hope the cannon pays off. :) Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 7/27/2014 12:29:00 PM Cool Senryu Sara. All the best for the contest, James :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/25/2014 5:56:00 PM Nice... I love what you did... Looking forward to reading all entries...Linda Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/23/2014 6:40:00 PM very interesting one. the last line is a kicker. Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/22/2014 8:57:00 AM Very brilliant take Sara ! Lovely senryu Perfect to the pic ! Sure to do well in contest,, good luck to u ! Login to Reply