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Battleship

a battleship sits stubbornly in a bottle... fire cannon one_crash Inspired by A Poet Destroyer Contest: One Solo Epic Senryu or Haiku: In A Bottle Written: July 22, 2014

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/21/2014 4:50:00 AM

Congrats on your deserved win. sara

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/20/2014 9:54:00 PM

A very nice one. Congrats on your great win my friend!!

Mark Trichet

Date: 8/20/2014 9:07:00 PM

Great Senryu Sarah. Even down to the formatting...Congrats

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/20/2014 8:01:00 PM

Hearty chuckle. Great piece, deserved winner.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/20/2014 5:54:00 PM

nice one...congrats

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/20/2014 5:24:00 PM

Clever! I enjoyed this one :) grats on your first place :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2014 3:05:00 PM

Nice win and big congratulations. It's so weird how they got them in a bottle that way.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/20/2014 10:57:00 AM

Congratulations on a superb TOP of the class win! Pandita

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 8/20/2014 9:45:00 AM

Blew me away - congrats on your win

Paul Callus

Date: 8/20/2014 9:41:00 AM

Ohhh this is smashing!! like your take on this bottle theme! Congratulations on a top win. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 9:28:00 AM

Sara, LOL, This one had my attention, from the get go. HEhehehe! Hope the cannon pays off. :) Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

James Fraser

Date: 7/27/2014 12:29:00 PM

Cool Senryu Sara. All the best for the contest, James :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/25/2014 5:56:00 PM

Nice... I love what you did... Looking forward to reading all entries...Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2014 6:40:00 PM

very interesting one. the last line is a kicker.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/22/2014 8:57:00 AM

Very brilliant take Sara ! Lovely senryu Perfect to the pic ! Sure to do well in contest,, good luck to u !