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This is for a contest and this a battle rap not really meant to insult or abuse anyone

its just for fun

I did not use a single swear word in the making of this poem,

Battle Rap

hey man, your words smell like tuna fish
your rhymes are ludicrous
and I have a wish
you on vacation would be my bliss
your shirt is wearing spagetti
did you dine in the serengeti
oh yeah ha ha  just call me ever ready
my words will make you sink and weep
I could be part of those boyz backstreet
'cause I got the beat
get off the rapping stage
and get back in your cage
your rhymes have no mustard
they are lackluster
oh yeah they are  just clutter
so cheap and flat
and that's a fact
do you need me to make a map
you need to call it a wrap
and take a long swim
while I grin
and drink gin
and you and your poems in the water spin
do you want some oil of olay
best go to bed for the day
maybe pray
until you grow gray
and your poems decay
just quit
if you don't like my wit
just stay in your pit
okay I am done
and really need to run
you know this was just for fun
all those insults I spun
yeh, its just for a competition
and I was on a mission
__________________________
May 25, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/Rap/Battle
Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1025-878-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


For the contest, 8 Mile Style,
Hip hop/free style rap 
sponsor, Tim Trim (a.k.a. Nick Trim)

Ninth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 6/24/2018 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 6/24/2018 6:17:00 AM
A fun rap, BW. You had me laughing. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/23/2018 8:01:00 AM
You got the beat! Congrats on your win.hugs Rick.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2018 10:13:00 AM
Thank you for the congrats and hugs Rick , this is the first rap I ever wrote and it was tons of fun
Date: 5/25/2018 9:36:00 PM
Cool rap :) After reading it the first time I read it again imagining Eminem's voice, and guess what? You nailed it! And no swear words. He could learn from you :)
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Constance La France
Date: 5/26/2018 1:21:00 PM
Mark, like I wrote.. i got the beat, lol
Date: 5/25/2018 3:16:00 PM
How weird, I thought didn't she do one yesterday, groundhog day. And I said I'm keeping out of your way.lol. As a precaution I always write on word then copy n paste, just in case. Tom.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/25/2018 3:21:00 PM
Tom, yes you did see one, in fact the same one. I still had the paper I had written it on but I should do what you are doing
Date: 5/25/2018 12:37:00 PM
What a fabulous rap Constance, I can't understand why it should disappear so suddenly, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 5/25/2018 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I have no idea what happened ???
Date: 5/25/2018 11:44:00 AM
hey, I posted this poem yesterday and got some good response, then woosh today it disappeared... but anyways, I remembered most of it...and like who knew I could rap... who knew???If it disappears again, I will call it a wrap !!!
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