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This is for a contest and this a battle rap not really meant to insult or abuse anyone

its just for fun

I did not use a single swear word in the making of this poem,

hey man, your words smell like tuna fish your rhymes are ludicrous and I have a wish you on vacation would be my bliss your shirt is wearing spagetti did you dine in the serengeti oh yeah ha ha just call me ever ready my words will make you sink and weep I could be part of those boyz backstreet 'cause I got the beat get off the rapping stage and get back in your cage your rhymes have no mustard they are lackluster oh yeah they are just clutter so cheap and flat and that's a fact do you need me to make a map you need to call it a wrap and take a long swim while I grin and drink gin and you and your poems in the water spin do you want some oil of olay best go to bed for the day maybe pray until you grow gray and your poems decay just quit if you don't like my wit just stay in your pit okay I am done and really need to run you know this was just for fun all those insults I spun yeh, its just for a competition and I was on a mission __________________________ May 25, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Rap/Battle Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1025-878-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, 8 Mile Style, Hip hop/free style rap sponsor, Tim Trim (a.k.a. Nick Trim) Ninth Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/24/2018 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 6/24/2018 6:17:00 AM
A fun rap, BW. You had me laughing. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/23/2018 8:01:00 AM
You got the beat! Congrats on your win.hugs Rick.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2018 10:13:00 AM
Thank you for the congrats and hugs Rick , this is the first rap I ever wrote and it was tons of fun
Date: 5/25/2018 9:36:00 PM
Cool rap :) After reading it the first time I read it again imagining Eminem's voice, and guess what? You nailed it! And no swear words. He could learn from you :)
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Constance La France
Date: 5/26/2018 1:21:00 PM
Mark, like I wrote.. i got the beat, lol
Date: 5/25/2018 3:16:00 PM
How weird, I thought didn't she do one yesterday, groundhog day. And I said I'm keeping out of your way.lol. As a precaution I always write on word then copy n paste, just in case. Tom.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/25/2018 3:21:00 PM
Tom, yes you did see one, in fact the same one. I still had the paper I had written it on but I should do what you are doing
Date: 5/25/2018 12:37:00 PM
What a fabulous rap Constance, I can't understand why it should disappear so suddenly, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 5/25/2018 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I have no idea what happened ???
Date: 5/25/2018 11:44:00 AM
hey, I posted this poem yesterday and got some good response, then woosh today it disappeared... but anyways, I remembered most of it...and like who knew I could rap... who knew???If it disappears again, I will call it a wrap !!!
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