Battle For Middle Earth

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unrhymed tercets striking three verses the last aimed at the deceivers

A voodoo doctor promotes death in an open arena to the living his crime is heresy killing of souls This from his unholy ancient domain pride you are making a mockery of the words written on stone Thou shalt not kill He whom plays the fool in my eyes the beggar no good tools work in Irish politics because if their was they would stand up and be counted

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/24/2018 5:49:00 AM

I think you are saying they are all deceivers..the voodoo doctor and the people in power. The general population needlessly suffers. This poem made me think, liam.

Donna Loughman

Date: 1/22/2018 8:12:00 PM

Thank you for bringing this subject in to an “open arena “ ...It’s time for all to stand up and be counted. Thank you for posting!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/22/2018 6:08:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow! This is a very powerful, excellent poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned.Very heartfelt!This world is a total mess in all,Liam.It breaks my heart to see all the bad things taking place all over.Abortion is such horrible crime against the sweet,innocent unborn babies, and all,Liam.Prayers are very powerful, n' we need to pray more for everyone n' everything, Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!Take very good care!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^