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She comes to bat with the score tied three to three. Staring out at the pitcher, she goes into her stance, just hoping the ball will come over the sweet part of the plate. Into her motion, the pitcher winds and fires. Gathering all of her strength, her eyes lock on the fast approaching yellow softball. Like a gladiator ready to charge, she coils her body ready to strike. Swinging with all her might, she connects and the crowd goes wild as the ball sails over the center fielder's head and to the fence. With the crowd cheering, she takes off like a young cheetah toward first. A smile on her face and a gleam in her eye, she looks up and catches the coaches signal to go to second. Seeing the ball is still in the outfield and the third base coach waving her on, she rounds second and heads for third. Fans fired up cheering, mom and dad hold their breath and pray as she rounds third for home. Looking up and seeing a good relay throw to the catcher, she throws on her brakes and reverses to third. A bullet throw from catcher to third base has her in a rundown. Like a ping pong ball, they have her running back and forth, but she’s not worried with her speed. Then it happens, the third baseman overthrows the catcher and she is off for home. Heart pounding and breathing hard, knowing it will be close, she dives feet first and slides into home base under the tag to make a home run. The crowd is roaring in the stands, jumping up and down, hollering and clapping their hands. Her team mates run out of the dugout and mob her with joy. She’s made the winning run to break the tie. By:5/23/2015 A true story of my nine year old granddaughter making the winning run. Poetry In Motion' Contest Info Sponsor Matt Caliri

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Date: 6/22/2020 8:10:00 PM
Am I watching a movie ... rooting for the enthralling girl batting with wonderful vigour ... Great ... Excellent write ...
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Date: 6/22/2020 5:32:00 PM
What a captivating narrative! You had me rooting for her, Eve...and she did not let me down!! Well done! Hugs // paul
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Date: 4/28/2020 11:48:00 AM
Eve, being a baseball lover, and former softball player, I was enthralled to read your account of your granddaughter's tiebreaking home run! The gladiator coiling, the cheetah racing, the team player following her base coach's directions, the drama of the rundown, the victorious final slide; all captured so wonderfully. I was captivated! Well done, my poetry friend. Enjoyed this very much.
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Date: 4/22/2020 3:05:00 PM
Awesome narrating ~ and it's true ! BONUS~~ what a proud moment captured in a family heirloom. Bravo, Eve!
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Date: 4/4/2020 11:17:00 AM
Beautiful poem, lovely granddaughter, Eve. A great narrative of the play by play, an enjoyable read for any grandmother.
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Date: 3/30/2020 12:00:00 AM
Hello, Eve. This true story is such a wonderful piece. A real joy to read for the first time. Also, I am delighted with what Silent One is doing with her latest contest. I entered the contest and chose the line from 'Batter Up'. Blessings.
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Date: 3/22/2020 1:55:00 PM
Eve, This wonderful tie-breaking poem hit a home run. The title looked familiar...,oh no, I knew it must happen eventually. I changed mine. PS: Grand-daughters are special gifts. -Richard
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Date: 6/9/2019 10:28:00 PM
Your captivating poem is potent and exhilarating, Eve. Congratulations on your wonderful win. warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/6/2019 12:48:00 PM
I could tell this was a real happening Eve. It was written with such realism. Your dear daughter will always have this play by play to cherish from her loving mom. I loved it! "she takes off like a young cheetah toward first.". So heartwarming Eve. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 5/21/2019 7:38:00 AM
I felt the crack of that bat and I was flying, Eve! This has not happened to me for over 50 years, so thank you for writing this one just for me!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/21/2019 8:51:00 AM
thank you
Date: 4/28/2019 6:00:00 AM
Ah, I can see you definitely own a treasury full of great memories, and bless your poet heart for sharing it Eve. Hope your day is filled with love , children, and gran baby .xo
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Date: 5/27/2015 7:25:00 PM
This write has intensity. It kept me on the edge of my seat. (7) enjoyed!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2015 1:50:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your encouraging compliment and the high rating , it helps to believe in myself and yes as any other grandparent I'm very proud. & Hugs Eve
Date: 5/26/2015 2:13:00 PM
Hi Eve, congratulations to you for another fine poem and a well-deserved top placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/29/2015 1:50:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your encouraging compliments, it helps to believe in myself and yes as any other grandparent I'm very proud. Blessings dear friend & Hugs Eve
Date: 5/26/2015 8:20:00 AM
Great narrative, Eve. You have me hooked from start to finish. Congratulations on your win! 7 from me.
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Date: 5/29/2015 1:51:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your encouraging compliment and the high rating, it helps to believe in myself and yes as any other grandparent I'm very proud. Blessings dear friend & Hugs Eve
Date: 5/25/2015 7:47:00 PM
Eve, your poem made me feel like I was there watching in person. Great write! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/29/2015 1:52:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your encouraging compliments, it helps to believe in myself and yes as any other grandparent I'm very proud. Blessings dear friend & Hugs Eve
Date: 5/25/2015 5:39:00 PM
EVE, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 5/29/2015 1:53:00 PM
Thank you, Linda, you're always my inspirational encourager. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/25/2015 2:55:00 PM
Hello Dear Eve, what a splendid write, I loved this story more so because is a true one!!
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Date: 5/29/2015 1:54:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Arthur, for your encouraging compliments, it helps to believe in myself and yes as any other grandparent I'm very proud. Blessings dear friend & Hugs Eve
Date: 5/25/2015 7:04:00 AM
That does bring back memories...congrats!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2015 1:57:00 PM
M.L., it does bring a lot of memories of my boys playing baseball, wrestling, soccer, basketball, and football. Blessings dear friend & Hugs Eve
Date: 5/25/2015 5:10:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Eve
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Date: 5/29/2015 1:58:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph hugs eve
Date: 5/25/2015 1:14:00 AM
Eve :) Congratulations, Love SKAT
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2015 1:59:00 PM
Thank you,Skat, with your encouraging help and all the others. Hugs eve
Date: 5/24/2015 8:15:00 PM
Thanks so much for the fine verse! Congrad's Light & Love
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/24/2015 10:38:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie, I do feel honored hugs
Date: 5/24/2015 5:49:00 PM
You must be so proud of her....I smiled just reading it.
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Date: 5/29/2015 2:01:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Tim, yes as any other grandparent I'm very proud. Blessings dear friend & Hugs Eve
Date: 5/24/2015 2:55:00 PM
Your poem is filled with so much excitement and spirited jubilation we are breathless just keeping up. Well written. Emile. #7
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2015 2:02:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your encouraging compliment and the high rating. It helps to believe in myself. Blessings dear friend & Hugs Eve
Date: 5/24/2015 8:03:00 AM
Amazing Poem, Eve. The vivid description brings the image to life, without much effort. Your granddaughter's experience is written in a rather exciting manner, one she would be proud of. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems. Might find some you like. Peace.
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2015 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Jiri, I just close my eyes and repeat her steps like a video. Your poetry is beautiful. Hugs eve
Date: 5/24/2015 12:55:00 AM
Wow!!! It created vivid picture in my eye as am reading your poem, she worth to be proud of ....7!, it so interesting and enjoyable, thanks for shared this beautiful piece..........Afolabi.
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2015 2:07:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your encouraging compliments,Afolabi, it helps to believe in myself . Blessings dear friend & Hugs Eve
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