Batter Up

My first poem you see
about how sweet I can be.
See my pretty dress?
Man I want to make a mess.
How'll I do it, can you guess?


By Jimmy Anderson for "Baby Babbles" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
April 14, 2011 at 10:30 AM
LOL, yes I can guess, Jimmy! Funny poem. Best wishes in the contest, little bro. Love, Carolyn
Foulk Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 7:30 PM
a great poem, enjoyed it. good luck in the contest
Wilson Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 7:17 PM
Well this is sure to be a winner...it's very cute Jimmy! Good luck with it...love,Deb
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 3:36 PM
Hey, this is GREAT, Jimmy! AT first when I saw the picture I thought maybe she was holding cookie dough, like a big ball of it! So at first,your title almost made me think of pancake batter!
Mehta Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Humourous and funny, Jimmy
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