Caren Krutsinger Poet Rhyme

Bats My Twin and I

Bats are flying again.
It would not be distressing to me.
But I have a twin.

Bats in the house.
Swooping down on creamed cheese.
My twin screaming in a kind of wheeze.

We used to agree on most everything
But I like my bats. 
They have plenty of zing.

My identical twin is the prissy one.
Her idea for bats
Is in no way fun…

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Michelle Faulkner November 26, 2019 at 10:33 PM Bats do have lots of zing! (though I don't want them in my cream cheese!) Caren Krutsinger November 27, 2019 at 2:46 AM I think they are fun to think about and write about, but I do not want to SEE one in my house. Three of my friends have, and they claim they DIVE toward them!