Lin Lane Poet Free verse

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Bathed In the Glow of Dawn

Mist washed across my lids in sleep
cleansing drizzle on my face, I woke
bathed in the glow of dawn's first light
I welcomed the soft kiss of morning

I searched the sky, discovering the sun
framed by trees, winking behind clouds
gentle rain had created a prism of colors
glistening diamonds of dew all around

A new day now risen, I faintly glimpsed
reasons for happiness awash over me
flocks of birds and herds of wild creatures
a mountain crest still blanketed in snow

With eyes seeing and ears keenly listening
I sensed the waking of this sleepy forest glen
On feet I've traveled, mysteries unraveled
Heaven daily renews the birth of our earth

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Paul Callus June 17, 2017 at 6:56 AM What beautiful images you have painted, Lin! Every day we are gifted with so many lovely things, though not all people appreciate them. You are one of the lucky ones who do! ~ Regards // paul Lin Lane June 17, 2017 at 7:32 AM I am indeed fortunate to appreciate the little things that are far too often overlooked, and you are just a fortunate. Thank you, Paul.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 14, 2017 at 4:34 AM - A lovely picture in this beautiful poem, Lin - It's glowing :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Lin Lane June 17, 2017 at 7:31 AM With a sincere thank you for liking this one, Anne-Lise.

Charlie Smith June 13, 2017 at 8:10 PM Oh to see those moments every single day. They are there, we don't look hard enough most times. Lovely write Dear Lin... Lin Lane June 13, 2017 at 8:22 PM I do so agree with you, Charlie. Mornings are refreshing and everything seems brand new. Thanks!

Casarah Nance June 13, 2017 at 5:22 PM a refreshing scene I could feel the serene of the moment Lin Lane June 13, 2017 at 8:21 PM Thank you very much for liking the serenity, Cas.

Tim Smith June 13, 2017 at 2:54 PM What a beautiful scene you created Lin...just wonderful Lin Lane June 13, 2017 at 4:29 PM Thank you for seeing it in beauty, Tim.

Daniel Turner June 13, 2017 at 2:23 PM If all mornings were like this, life would be grand. Beautifully written, peaces:) Lin Lane June 13, 2017 at 4:29 PM Would be grand indeed, Danny. Thanks so much.

Heidi Sands June 13, 2017 at 2:17 PM This is a joy to read. So beautiful :) Lin Lane June 13, 2017 at 4:28 PM Thank you for your kind comments, Heidi.