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Mist washed across my lids in sleep cleansing drizzle on my face, I woke bathed in the glow of dawn's first light I welcomed the soft kiss of morning I searched the sky, discovering the sun framed by trees, winking behind clouds gentle rain had created a prism of colors glistening diamonds of dew all around A new day now risen, I faintly glimpsed reasons for happiness awash over me flocks of birds and herds of wild creatures a mountain crest still blanketed in snow With eyes seeing and ears keenly listening I sensed the waking of this sleepy forest glen On feet I've traveled, mysteries unraveled Heaven daily renews the birth of our earth

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Date: 6/17/2017 6:56:00 AM
What beautiful images you have painted, Lin! Every day we are gifted with so many lovely things, though not all people appreciate them. You are one of the lucky ones who do! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/17/2017 7:32:00 AM
I am indeed fortunate to appreciate the little things that are far too often overlooked, and you are just a fortunate. Thank you, Paul.
Date: 6/14/2017 4:34:00 AM
- A lovely picture in this beautiful poem, Lin - It's glowing :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/17/2017 7:31:00 AM
With a sincere thank you for liking this one, Anne-Lise.
Date: 6/13/2017 8:10:00 PM
Oh to see those moments every single day. They are there, we don't look hard enough most times. Lovely write Dear Lin...
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Date: 6/13/2017 8:22:00 PM
I do so agree with you, Charlie. Mornings are refreshing and everything seems brand new. Thanks!
Date: 6/13/2017 5:22:00 PM
a refreshing scene I could feel the serene of the moment
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Date: 6/13/2017 8:21:00 PM
Thank you very much for liking the serenity, Cas.
Date: 6/13/2017 2:54:00 PM
What a beautiful scene you created Lin...just wonderful
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Date: 6/13/2017 4:29:00 PM
Thank you for seeing it in beauty, Tim.
Date: 6/13/2017 2:23:00 PM
If all mornings were like this, life would be grand. Beautifully written, peaces:)
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Date: 6/13/2017 4:29:00 PM
Would be grand indeed, Danny. Thanks so much.
Date: 6/13/2017 2:17:00 PM
This is a joy to read. So beautiful :)
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Date: 6/13/2017 4:28:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Heidi.

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