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Bathed In Hope



swans
wiggle
on ponds blue
tracing deep curves
like silken maidens
figure skating
life’s new maze
bathed in 
hope

hopelifenaturefree verse

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/8/2014 3:40:00 AM

i love the idea of being bathed with hope.. :) wow!!! truly it will bring you a feeling of lightheartedness :) and the combination of swans and maidens.. :) the imagery is great.. :)

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 3/29/2012 7:49:00 PM

stunning as usual Nette......... congrats on your placememnt in Joann's ninette contest............~sashi

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/28/2012 3:25:00 PM

A lovely ninette, Nette. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2012 7:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Ninette" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/28/2012 12:17:00 AM

Congrats on your super win in this contest, Nette..I love this...

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/27/2012 8:19:00 PM

Congrats,Nette on your win!!! Well Done!! Big Huggsss!! love~deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/27/2012 7:54:00 PM

congrats Nette luv on a terrific first place win for another awesome entry ..wow a great photo luv..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/27/2012 7:08:00 PM

Congratulations Nette. LThis is beautifully written. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/27/2012 7:05:00 PM

Beautiful as your poems are! Congratulations, Nette!!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/27/2012 6:15:00 PM

Congratulations on first place.

M.I.A .

Date: 3/26/2012 8:33:00 PM

wow! lovely in everything nette. specially the way you open it with a swan! good luck on the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2012 5:02:00 PM

Nette, this is beautiful written, like always. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 3/24/2012 2:02:00 PM

You have captivated me with your words.Beyond beautiful my dear~

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/24/2012 12:22:00 PM

Wow how beautiful this one is! I like this one a lot due to its "bathed in hope" lines, very ingenious Nette! I love your write very much my friend! I really enjoyed this poem that I have read this afternoon! I believe you really enjoy the water too, as I do? I don't live too far from a Great Lake(Lake Erie) and I visit whenever I can! I have relatives that live off the lake, very convenient! I think of this poem as being on a great lake swans swim and maidens skate! I love your poem! Great Work

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/24/2012 10:46:00 AM

thank you for your kind words to my wife on her poem nette and she is able to read with me tonite and has enjoyed your entry for competition very much offering best wishes for a win. Ron.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/24/2012 9:02:00 AM

What a wonderful poem, nette, you never fail to leave me in awe of your beautiful poems. harry

Christopher Bunton

Date: 3/24/2012 8:15:00 AM

Very Good!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/24/2012 8:03:00 AM

Excellent work..Delightful picture..Thanks for stopping by my Didactic..Yes, I was writing that for myself as well..It is not easy to be all that we should be at all times.soup mail soon...Sara

Mark Goodson

Date: 3/24/2012 7:28:00 AM

Now I like this very much! My grandmother had some swans on a farm lake. As a boy, I was enchanted by its gracefullness and beauty. Thanks for the poem.