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Bathed In Blood

She laid in the luke warm water with her eyes rolled back... sucking on her candy razor.... Forth from her mouth...her problems poored down.... Bathed in blood that was thicker... Refusing to live anylonger she'll die without a sound... She's begging for the afterlife as onix rain locks flowed like a ghost over her shoulders tainted black.... A slash into once treasured creativity... An unhonorable death caused by nothing more then self pity.... His eyes closed looking shameful towards the floor without hope... His hands held together tightly as if he bothered to pray. His hair beautiful as if he still had life touched by the lanterns soft gentle ray... It dug deeply around this throat.... pooring his problems out staining the rope..bathed in blood.. A knot cutting off into a once loved company.... A thoughtless death...because life was lonly. They pulled the trigger wih no regrets.. fear arises in shouting classrooms.. Carelessly shooting..... Now only recalling of the lost sons and daughters.. things mothers and fathers never forget... .tears they shed in there bedroom... Bathed in blood schooling... A bullet for cruelty... A pointless death because of sensitivity...

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