Bath Tub

I guess I like laying in the bath tub,
Because it's the closest thing to a coffin in a sub.
Cold and hard like my life, but comfortable as I thrive,
Only difference is I have the option to be alive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 12:29 PM
I felt your big little poem. As visceral as it is quaint, lovely done. xomo
Blown Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 10:12 AM
ve...come from ze vater.....enjoy......len
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