Bartered Wives

Lekker read... "Bartered Wives"... Still happens...
Written February 17, 2013 Sponsor: Suzette Crous Contest: Lekker!-A New Contest "Bartered Brides" title of a book I am reading.. Form: Ellip
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Amezimi Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 5:17 PM
straight forward, deep haiku.
Kendrick Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 6:03 AM
Actually the form of the poetry is Ellip but it is not in the list on here..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
A   Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 9:48 PM
Sara, a wonderful winning poem. Congratulations... always~ LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 6:04 AM
PD, Thanks for the visit to this one a long time ago..Sara
Squyres Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 7:56 AM
Congrats on your win !! Good use of the word.
Gigno Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 8:47 PM
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Haick Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 7:43 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Sara! Love, Annalise
Lamoureux Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 7:33 PM
Congrats on top ten finish Sarah
Johnson Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 7:18 PM
Sounds very interesting Sara. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 2:47 PM
Congrats Sara ... Seren
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February 28, 2013 at 12:32 PM
Sara congrats on your win. Connie
Duncan Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 2:12 PM
good afternoon Sara,,,, I like this very much ;},,, thank you for reading " I call her name" it was my X, 17 yrs we were together.
A   Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 9:27 PM
Hello, Sara the verse and entry come with a deep meaning... thank you for sharing..PD
Loving Iii Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 2:00 PM
I'm thinking battered wifes?
Carrillo Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 1:25 PM
Sara; You are so right. In our time and age - it still happens. I just saw on a special show about this woman, she is Hispanic. Her husband abused her every which way. The last he did was - he cut off her left hand, two fingers of her right hand, stabbed her and burned her face with acid. He letf her for dead and took off for Mexico. She survived and is now telling her story. Good luck in contest. Lucilla
Sivey Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 8:35 PM
This is a wonderful and delightful write my friend! I am amazed at the beauty you write within this illustrious poem! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!
Beaufort Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 4:50 PM
A sad subject. The wrong kind of pedestal.
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 4:09 PM
what did Lekker mean in this case? Way to employ the new ellip form with another contest idea!!
Grisetti Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 12:41 PM
Sounds like an interesting book. I have been reading about the Korean women kidnapped and sold as wives into China.
Williams Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 8:52 AM
Sara a very strong message on a dreadful thing....David
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