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'barroom's Bliss"

In the bar room’s bliss, `Tis great aggravation, For many fists I've kissed, With my face of devastation. __Anon__ In Honor of: Charles Henderson and Contest Placed #1

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Timothy Brumley

Date: 7/15/2010 6:23:00 AM

Congrats on your win in Charles contest with this epic poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/14/2010 10:19:00 AM

Congratulations John on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "The Grook". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/14/2010 6:59:00 AM

Congrats Moses on your big win and first place for the Grook contest.. very original and creative work.. enjoy.. did u get my soup mail? with luv..

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 7/14/2010 5:43:00 AM

Nicely done John, I haven't found the knack yet for this writing....Congradulations!! Jeralynn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/13/2010 11:24:00 PM

Congrats on your fine win in the contest..Funny ! love it.l BG

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/13/2010 10:47:00 PM

two excellent Grooks here yours and joe's congratulations on your win. Harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/13/2010 10:45:00 PM

Major congrats on your 1st place win with this grook-- definitely a hit, John!! -- nikko :)

Charles Henderson

Date: 7/13/2010 10:06:00 PM

Congrats on your no. 1 place in my Grook contest.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/13/2010 10:03:00 PM

Big congrats on taking second place with your great grook, John! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/13/2010 4:42:00 AM

enjoyed, hope you are having a great day...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2010 1:11:00 PM

sounds like great bliss for a fighing man! Nicely done. LUv, Andrea

Molly Cooper

Date: 7/9/2010 12:33:00 PM

I like this well written!~ Molly

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/9/2010 11:16:00 AM

Like the way you describe hitting firsts with your nose. Made me smile, John. Great grook and I wish you success in Charles' contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2010 11:44:00 PM

A nice entry to the contest. Good luck

Tirzah Conway

Date: 7/8/2010 8:29:00 PM

Don't you just hate those barroom brawls-I know I do, so messy!~Tirzah~

Jesu Johnson

Date: 7/8/2010 7:53:00 PM

This is a classic...... anyone who has had a BARFIGHT can relate, lol!!!!!!