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Barrier Island

What weighs down this sandy wisp
between a bay and ocean is not
a causeway, not the press of footed towers,
nor the tread of bare and browning bathers
on its narrow, wet, khaki-colored beaches --
It is the weight of air, cloudless, clear
but heavy air -- blue in the depths --
that arches overhead; and it is the sizzle 
of minor surf along the island's edges,
dampening sand, to stick upon the sea
like a licked stamp upon a letter.
The men, roads, and condos all may seem
to wrest control from nature and its weather;
but, we, who've spent some years here,
know better.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Eastman Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 8:12 AM
The visuals you present are very interesting. I've always been land locked.
Foley Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Light airy refreshing. A Lovely read. I wish I could find that lightest of touches but I seem to dig to deep.Yes hope ore people hit upon this and more. Love it. Good luck. Rgds I Ian
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 9:03 PM
this is so poetic, Leo. you are quite talented. I hope more people might see this one. Free verse at its finest.
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