Barren Tree

The rivers run with tears
As oceans bear the rain
Sailors sail through fears
With no promise of terrain

Only to dwell and reach this land
That moans with sorrow and grief
Only to hold on to a lonely hand
The way a tree holds its last leaf

Don’t praise the moments of joy
Because they hardly ever last
Summers are memories to enjoy
When the Autumns come too fast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Shoemaker Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Nicely done.
Kanafani Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 12:48 PM
Thank you very much
A  Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 9:05 PM
ABDULLATIF :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT~
Kanafani Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 7:11 AM
Thank you once again SKAT I feel very honored
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 7:06 AM
I really like those last two lines, they finish off this wonderful poem superbly. Strong write.
Kanafani Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:08 AM
How kind of you to acknowledge my efforts thank you
La France Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 3:38 AM
Abdul, I love this poem, it is so soothing and flows beautifully, and congratulations on having it featured this week on the home page, enjoy the honor ~
Kanafani Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 3:42 AM
Thanks so much it is definitely an honor, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. It means a lot to know that people are reading my stuff. Thanks again for commenting
A  Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 3:06 PM
enjoying your first poem once again. Love SKAT
Kanafani Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 3:22 PM
How nice thanks SKAT
Mobley Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 1:18 AM
This one is very nice in so many ways. Nice.
Kanafani Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Thanks so much for commenting Dean
A   Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 12:31 AM
Abdullatif, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> Linda
Kanafani Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 2:29 AM
So sweet of you It will be an absolute pleasure to read your poetry as well. And becoming literary friends sharing writing can't wait
Folkers Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 9:53 PM
Wow I really like it welcome to poetry soup great first write
Kanafani Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 3:17 AM
thank you for the warm welcome
A  Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 2:12 PM
Abdullatif,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs.. SKAT
A  Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 7:16 PM
Hi Abdullatif, I'm looking forward in reading more of your poems... PLEASE!!!
Kanafani Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 3:16 PM
How kind thank you for the effortful greeting. You have given me a great prospect of how well mannered and sincere poets on this website are. It will be a pleasure reading your poetry no doubt. And I would also like to get to know you too. Thanks a million SKAT.
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