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Barren Solitude

I sit in this cocoon of lonely thought re-reading all your texts and little notes I close my cel but I am slow to blot the words that you have sent just yesterday; You promised me that you were here to stay but then you sadly tore my heart 's remote, you said you loved me but, you loved me not. August 16, 2018 Contest Name: Rhyme Time Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Date: 9/11/2018 6:10:00 AM
a coccoon of lonely thought...great word expressed dear Pixie...Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement..-luloo
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Date: 8/17/2018 5:00:00 AM
Aww great, yet so sad too. -JWE
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Date: 8/16/2018 8:00:00 PM
even handwritten letters are very scarce these days...wonderfully rendered,pixie...huggs
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Date: 8/16/2018 7:21:00 PM
In the day of texts and cells life must be extra hard!
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Date: 8/16/2018 5:36:00 PM
Well penned, Pixie. A jewel.
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