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Barren

Barren winter brought with it

                     weakness in body
                     but not of heart
                     clearness of the mind
                      for the most part

Life isn't easy

                 but never has been
                 being young in body
                helped with life's disappointments content

 Or

                maybe maturity and wisdom
                gives us the grace to 
                just let it go

Inspired after reading a poem written by William Morris
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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George Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 12:12 AM
Sometimes we feel we are lost and become sad. But with age, we grow more mature and let things go. Inspirational thoughts.
Kendrick Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 4:33 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I think as we age, we get it. I appreciate the visit and understanding comments. Sara K.
Smith  Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 8:10 PM
Interesting thoughts.
Kendrick Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 4:29 AM
Why, thank you, Alison. I appreciate the drop by and leaving a comment. Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 5:10 PM
How nice you were inspired by William Morris. Gosh. I saw his art work but never even read a poem of his yet. Which poem of his was it?
Kendrick Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 4:29 AM
Andrea, I found his poem on the poetry site "Poem Hunter" and it is the poem entitled, "Winter". I appreciate the thoughtful review. Sara K.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 2:58 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write with a great picture. I Have been off Soup for 2 weeks. I needed an Ink Transfusion. Hahaha!!! Now back/ready to go Writing Away. Have a blessed day/weekend 4th writing...............
Kendrick Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 3:19 PM
I have found that sometimes I have needed a break to refresh me. Glad you are back, Paula. I appreciate the visit. Sara K.
Poet Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 2:32 PM
This is a piece of exceptional depth and creativity, Sara. I was astonished by the beauty of each line, and I wish you the best.
Kendrick Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 3:17 PM
Your comments are encouraging, Lasaad. Thank you for dropping by. Sara K.
Rolland Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 2:10 PM
i totally agree with your message, the mental health, is good for the body, to keep it young, thanks poet Sara
Kendrick Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 3:16 PM
It's good to know you agree with the message, Yann. Thank you for the visit and taking time to comment. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 12:58 PM
Yes, we let it go. Well said!
Kendrick Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 3:13 PM
I have had to let a lot go, Kim. It isn't easy, but God is helping me get by. Sara K.
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