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Young Barred Jeff the hair once heired and was bard
from Barred Bare Camp cause when bear he was hard.
Neigh,said he in the bairn wear the auld stud nayed,
Owe, eye oh fare Merry her fair must bee paid.

Her fair's dew her an' eye'll faint with me stave.
The auld counselor feinted *** Jeff misbehaved.
My stave is like ewe just ask Merry's made
oar ask the yew in the dew; she'll bleat what eye said.

Barred Jeff maid a song witch told of his whiles
it went on two long wile marry Merry beguiled.
Know boatman with or, oar blacksmith can boar
wench better, he said, of this eye am sure.

Perhaps, a black stallion, perhaps a bold bore
butt, barred Jeff beared was the won who scored.

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Young Bard Jeff the heir once erred and was barred
from Bard Bear Camp cause when bare he was hard.
Nay said he in the barn where the old stud neighed,
Oh, I owe fair Mary her fare must be paid.

Her fare's due her an' I'll feint with me stave
the old counselor fainted as Jeff misbehaved.
My stave is like yew, just ask Mary's maid 
or ask the ewe in the dew it'll bleat what I said.

Bard Jeff made a song which told of his wiles
it went on too long while merry Mary beguiled.
No boatmen with oar, or blacksmith can bore
wench better, he said, of this I'm quite sure. 

Perhaps, a black stallion, perhaps a bold boar, 
but, Bard Jeff bared was the one who scored.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/17/2015 3:02:00 PM
You do crack me up, sometimes...this was great.
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Date: 4/17/2015 6:06:00 AM
A great ballad by an inimitable composer. Kudos! 7++++!
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Date: 4/16/2015 3:45:00 PM
Haha, took me a sec to realize what was going on! I started laughing when I realized! ;) Wonderful piece!! <3 Tash
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Date: 4/16/2015 7:11:00 AM
Wow Deb, you also came up with your own...I enjoyed...though I had to read twice to understand the story...lol. Blessings for the contest! :) Kim
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Date: 4/16/2015 12:53:00 AM
Excellent pen Debbie! I enjoyed reading your nice piece,dear friend.A good one:)A 7 from me!Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light! God bless you!:) D
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