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edged teeth grate live bones ransacked by its spineless bite red bubbles at sea __________________________________________________________ \\\\\\ \\\\\\ r teeth grate live bones e s d r d e e a a g n b d ** s u e a b s c b t p k l a i e e n d s e l e s s b i t e ___ i t s b y ////// //////

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Date: 7/17/2025 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in this creative contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 7/17/2025 12:26:00 PM
Chilling Trina. I love the fins! Congrats on winning! Anaya
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Date: 7/16/2025 9:19:00 PM
Interesting write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 7/16/2025 11:05:00 AM
Great job. Congrats on the win
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/16/2025 5:04:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 7/16/2025 10:11:00 AM
Very cool image!! Xo
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/16/2025 5:04:00 PM
Well, I've gotten a bit better since my first attempt at the shapes. Comments noted and appreciated:)
Date: 7/13/2025 7:56:00 AM
I liked the haiku and the last line said so much. The concrete version of this work was interesting.
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/13/2025 11:58:00 AM
Appreciate your comments, Mike.
Date: 7/10/2025 2:47:00 PM
Exquisite. Well, except for the red bubbles part. Yipe!
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/10/2025 2:51:00 PM
Thanks Tom. Lol... except for the red bubbles.

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