1st in Shaped Haiku 2 (Sponsor: JCB Brul)
Judged: July 16th, 2025
edged teeth grate live bones ransacked by its spineless bite red bubbles at sea __________________________________________________________ \\\\\\ \\\\\\ r teeth grate live bones e s d r d e e a a g n b d ** s u e a b s c b t p k l a i e e n d s e l e s s b i t e ___ i t s b y ////// //////
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