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1st in Shaped Haiku 2 (Sponsor: JCB Brul)

Judged: July 16th, 2025

edged teeth grate live bones
ransacked by its spineless bite
red bubbles at sea

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r                                         teeth grate live bones   
e       s                        d                                           r 
d          e                e                                                    a                   
              a          g                                                              n
b                   d                                                   **                 s      
u             e                                                                                a                
b                    s                                                                               c         
b         t              p                                                                      k     
l      a                     i                                                                e           
e                               n                                                       d           
s                                    e                                                     
                                           l e s s   b i t e  ___  i t s   b y                                        
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Date: 8/2/2025 10:50:00 PM
Wow! Such an amazing/creative shape haiku poem! Belated warm congrats on your first place win too my dear poet friend! Cheers and hugs! Thanks for sharing! Sorry for coming late coz of my bike accident lately. But I'm ok now. Happy wkend/new week ahead! Hugs
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Trina Layne
Date: 8/3/2025 4:45:00 AM
Thanks, Len! Your comments are appreciated. Sorry to hear about your bike accident. Glad you're feeling much better now. Be well:)
Date: 7/17/2025 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in this creative contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 7/17/2025 12:26:00 PM
Chilling Trina. I love the fins! Congrats on winning! Anaya
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Date: 7/16/2025 9:19:00 PM
Interesting write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 7/16/2025 11:05:00 AM
Great job. Congrats on the win
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/16/2025 5:04:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 7/16/2025 10:11:00 AM
Very cool image!! Xo
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/16/2025 5:04:00 PM
Well, I've gotten a bit better since my first attempt at the shapes. Comments noted and appreciated:)
Date: 7/13/2025 7:56:00 AM
I liked the haiku and the last line said so much. The concrete version of this work was interesting.
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/13/2025 11:58:00 AM
Appreciate your comments, Mike.
Date: 7/10/2025 2:47:00 PM
Exquisite. Well, except for the red bubbles part. Yipe!
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/10/2025 2:51:00 PM
Thanks Tom. Lol... except for the red bubbles.
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