Notes About The Poem

For Seth Pina's "Obsession 2" poetry contest

This is a response of the obsessed character to Nikki, the girl he wanted to love him but turned crazy in the process.

Based on a really good new horror movie called Obsession.

r/horror - 'Obsession' Writer/Director On "Tragic Story" Within Horror Movie

Baron Bear Bailey

I am the taker of your sanity.
Have I lost my humanity?
What I see before me can’t be true.
Nikki, I see the wrong version of you.

So obsessed with you I was for years.
But now my eyes feel flooded with tears.
The wish I made I know now was ungodly.
I only wanted though for you to love me.

That “One Willow Branch’ I had to break,
but I’ve turned you into someone who is fake.
Logic and compassion, Nikki, you now lack.
How I wish my wish I could take back.

As if in a trance you smile and come creeping,
and I think you even watch me as I’m sleeping.
We’re playing now a game of cat and mouse.
You even tried to trap me in my own house.

My need to possess you turned you jealous and insane.
The real you, Nikki, is shrieking in my brain.
To set you free, I must kill myself although
I’ll leave you in a mess!  Oh why
     did I ever break that “One Wish Willow.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 2:16 PM
you captured the tension and obsession in the movie quite well.
Hind Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 8:47 PM
deep...I feel for him :(
Kendrick Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 4:17 AM
I don't really like any kind of scary, or horror shows or movies anymore, but my old body can't take that stress, but sometimes those are based on a life event which someone has lived which is a real-life horror which is so sad. This one reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing. Sara K.
Loving Iii Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 3:32 PM
Reality hits hard. Especially regret. Hard to tell If you want to reconcile of divorce. But one thing. The Pen helps us see and discribe. I loved the rhyming, to me it adds importance.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 8:04 AM
You did a great job with this. Haunting indeed! Please check your email :)
Harp Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 5:53 AM
Andrea, I had a feeling when I was reading this without seeing the photo that it was about a thriller movie. Well done. So often these thriller movies have a title that has an "innocence" within, like reference to innocent Teddy Bears, or clowns ... but that first line is a zinger! Moon Harp
Godwin Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 8:52 PM
I'm lost more than my norm because I haven't even heard of the movie much less have any insight about it. It's a good write; rampant emotional activity made me dizzy so that's good. And the psychotic dysfunction is a grabber.
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 11:56 PM
This poem would be hard to understand without having the context of the movie. Go see Seth Pina's poem Obsession He is the contest sponsor. He wrote from Nikki's point of view and I decided to write from the guys point of view. He broke a magic Willow branch and wished for Nikki to love him but Nikki was possessed and not herself so it developed into a personal hell for both the obsessed and the object of the obsession. A super good movie
DiMino Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 5:37 AM
My wife once said to me, don't let me do this to you. She knew her power. This is a great poem! Never heard of the movie. I will check it out.
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 10:22 PM
Thanks. Maybe the movie is on Fandango or prime soon
Anaya Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 1:33 PM
aha, I had read Seth's Nikki, creepy yet I couldn't stop, I now want to see the thriller. This is a perfect response, & sequel! We can be in denial when it comes to love, BOL!
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 5:57 PM
That movie was really good compared to other thrillers out there!
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