Barn Swallows

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swallows'
cobalt blue glistens 
as they dart catching insects
at dawn against foggy creek rise
freedom to be alive

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/3/2025 10:12:00 PM

Your poem touched my heart with joy, Sara. This is a fave. :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/4/2025 3:42:00 AM

Why, thank you, Evelyn. I am honored that you would fav it. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 8/2/2025 2:36:00 AM

Sky is their world with no boundaries. Sighting birds and hearing their joyful tweets is a pleasure. You have painted a beautiful scene.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/2/2025 12:17:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa. Yes, could you imagine flying up over the area in which you live with wings that would support you. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/1/2025 4:22:00 PM

how joyful this poem felt...I love watching birds at sunrise...they inspire and energize me. Well done, Sara K. Have a pleasant evening. Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/2/2025 2:15:00 AM

Nice to know you enjoy doing some bird watching. They add interest to a day. Your visit adds a special touch. Sara K

Anne Winter

Date: 8/1/2025 7:32:00 AM

The joy and liberty of being alive and breathing to start the day earnestly. Love this poem! Gorgeous and pleasant!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/1/2025 9:20:00 AM

Why, thank you, Anne. I appreciate your uplifting spirit and encouragement. Sara K