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Barn Swallows

swallows' cobalt blue glistens as they dart catching insects at dawn against foggy creek rise freedom to be alive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Buehler Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 10:12 PM
Your poem touched my heart with joy, Sara. This is a fave. :)
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:42 AM
Why, thank you, Evelyn. I am honored that you would fav it. Sara K
George Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 2:36 AM
Sky is their world with no boundaries. Sighting birds and hearing their joyful tweets is a pleasure. You have painted a beautiful scene.
Kendrick Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 12:17 PM
Thank you, Valsa. Yes, could you imagine flying up over the area in which you live with wings that would support you. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 4:22 PM
how joyful this poem felt...I love watching birds at sunrise...they inspire and energize me. Well done, Sara K. Have a pleasant evening. Sara
Kendrick Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 2:15 AM
Nice to know you enjoy doing some bird watching. They add interest to a day. Your visit adds a special touch. Sara K
Winter Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 7:32 AM
The joy and liberty of being alive and breathing to start the day earnestly. Love this poem! Gorgeous and pleasant!
Kendrick Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 9:20 AM
Why, thank you, Anne. I appreciate your uplifting spirit and encouragement. Sara K
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