Barn Swallows

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swallows' cobalt blue glistens as they dart catching insects at dawn against foggy creek rise freedom to be alive

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/1/2025 4:22:00 PM

how joyful this poem felt...I love watching birds at sunrise...they inspire and energize me. Well done, Sara K. Have a pleasant evening. Sara

Anne Winter

Date: 8/1/2025 7:32:00 AM

The joy and liberty of being alive and breathing to start the day earnestly. Love this poem! Gorgeous and pleasant!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/1/2025 9:20:00 AM

Why, thank you, Anne. I appreciate your uplifting spirit and encouragement. Sara K