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Barmaid Betty Barmaid Betty's big bouncy boobies beggar belief, bada bing bada boom. But being blessed by bountiful breasts brings burdens, bada bing bada boom. Backache being barely bearable by bedtime, bada bing bada boom. Basically, Betty's beautiful boobs beguile, bashful blokes, bada bing bada boom. Bewitching barmaid Betty became Belle of the Ball, bada bing bada boom. 31st December 2020

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 6/7/2021 8:32:00 PM

Another super duper entry! The alliteration soars in your delightful homage to Barmaid Betty. You have a natural flair for creative writing - most definitely! Best wishes, Brian

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/8/2021 1:38:00 AM

Brian thank you that’s music to my ears. Best wishes sent back… Belle

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/6/2021 10:23:00 AM

Whew... That was a tongue twister, indeed! You did a great job, Belle. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/6/2021 10:29:00 AM

Thank you lots for that Alexis and the best wishes too. Belle :-)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/2/2021 7:51:00 PM

Boom boom de boom // This one's gonna zoom // right up to the top // if Betty's boobies don't pop! Wonderful alliteration there, Belle. ~ Bibi Netanyahu

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/4/2021 11:48:00 AM

Thank you Gershon, if Betty’s boobies flop. there’s no way she’ll be top of the pops... Belle

Paul Callus

Date: 12/31/2020 12:00:00 PM

This is definitely a witty bouncy tongue twister, Belle:) bada bing bada boom is such a creative catchy refrain! Happy New Year ~ paul

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/31/2020 2:34:00 PM

Thank you for that Paul, appreciated. Best wishes to you too for a Happy New Year ~ Belle

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/31/2020 10:51:00 AM

Naught to worry as lads like me are always willing to lend an helping hand! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! Aloha! Rico

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/31/2020 2:31:00 PM

That’s good to know Rico. A Happy New year to you too. ~ Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/31/2020 1:54:00 AM

I heard all blokes were singing bada bing bada boom. Pity I can't sing properly. Happy New Year

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/31/2020 5:11:00 AM

Ha, I can’t sing either, but I do anyway... Thank you Victor and “Best wishes for the New Year” ~~ Belle

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/31/2020 1:03:00 AM

Haha, she should buy a wheel barrow lol. Good luck in the contest and a very happy new year to you. Tom

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/31/2020 5:07:00 AM

Ha, good idea Tom that’d take the weight off her shoulders. Thanks for the good luck, a very Happy New Year to you too. Belle