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Baring Souls

time grows thin
each moment precious
the blunt truth is
I do imagine
life without you

lonely as it might be

idle wanderings
without a compass
I’d long to find you
hear your voice
to feel you near



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~CITYLIGHTS~ 2021

AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on November 19, 2021 for SOUL contest sponsored by ROBERT JAMES LIGUORI  -  Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write. I Love This One. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 10:22 AM
Thank you very much, Paula. Most appreciated ~
Liguori Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Thank you for entering the contest. Congrats on your placement. Robert
Gauthier Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 3:46 PM
Most appreciated, thanks, Robert ~
Mays Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 7:54 PM
Thanks for this poignant reflection. Very well said.
Gauthier Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:36 PM
Thank you, Carol ~ much appreciated
Strand Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 1:09 AM
Line,Your blog is much appreciated..only by being open as this verse reveals do we move on.Cheers
Gauthier Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Thank you very much, Brian ~
Strand Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 12:19 AM
Perfect pace in the audio Line,it suits your voice
Gauthier Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Most appreciated, Brian ~
Skelly Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 8:40 PM
Poignant read, love your reading of poem Line...Delice
Gauthier Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Thank you so very much, Delice ~
Strand Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 7:12 AM
For the poet Line,the only place to go
Gauthier Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 9:32 AM
Understood ~ thanks, Brian
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September 2, 2021 at 8:15 AM
Tender, rendering write, very touching. love and hugs, xomo
Gauthier Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 10:45 PM
Thank you very much, Maureen ~
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