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Baring It All

Halfway through the grave lines Of a flowing sonnet A cherry verse fastened to the rhyming boughs Of mine rhythmic apricot, muse Each rhyme held its own beauty, As the stormy poet within-- Seized all, began ~ writing furiously Regarding, life, death and cantos of love… Baring all or perhaps nothing at all Loosing all or perhaps nothing at all…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/17/2008 12:02:00 AM
I agree with Micheal,Nice ending Adell.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 10/16/2008 6:35:00 AM
Adell sometimes it seems that way I loved the ending of this poem - God Bless
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Date: 10/16/2008 5:20:00 AM
Lovely poem. I really enjoyed it, especially "A cherry verse fastened to the rhyming boughs". Keep writing. Nigel
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