Bariatric Childhood

Monday blues.............
The story of ages goes on 
Skin and bones like a cling film
Tighten against empty stomachs
Like bariatric procedures 

Another day..............
The daily walk of miles for 
Few drops of holy water
Trickling in imagination like
Lost mirages in sandy travails

Earlyman lives on..............
Childhood is not a dance in elysian gardens
But the kickstart of endless struggling days
For starving children with ribbed bodies for morsels 
That we with callous hands disband in overflowing bins

April 9, 2016
Picture # 1
For Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 27, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your " Images that make you think WIN." Always ~LINDA~
Cheema Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 7:44 AM
Thanks Linda!
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April 14, 2016 at 9:39 PM
Congrats on your win, Balveen:)
Cheema Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Thanks Laura!
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 7:16 PM
I think my words WERE magical. GREAT win, and congratulations.
Cheema Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 7:45 AM
They sure were, Andrea! Thanks!
Haight Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Balveen, congratulations on your placement in Silent One's contest. Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 7:47 AM
Thanks Sandra!
Davey Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Congrats on your placement
Cheema Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 7:46 AM
Thanks Brian!
Misra Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Lovely write, Balveen. You got it just right about the underprivileged. You definitely deserve a prize in the contest. Karam
Cheema Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Thanks Karam for your sweet thoughts!
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April 11, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Balveen, this is a wonderful write for that image number 1, and the contest, best of luck, 7 ~
Cheema Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Thanks, dear Constance!
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 1:49 PM
wow, I think you really captured the essence of that picture here. I hope you score high with this. GREAT write, Balveen
Cheema Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 9:11 PM
Thanks Andrea! I hope your words are magical!
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