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Barefoot Irish Lad

A barefoot lad, in blue overalls, laying in a meadow of green growing clover appearing to slumber, His green Irish hat lies over his face under the shadow of a willow. A pot of fantasy Irish gold sits by his shoulder. In whisper snore, and relationship with nature’s warmth fellowship And wondering thoughts of plunder A poetic vision in the figure of an Irish rover, A high boisterous fun with mischief of sin feeling the senses of lilt rhythm within, music, song, scenery, and good weather He steals a look at the stars carrying in the day and a benediction it finds. The harmony of being together, a meeting of the minds, an instinct that is stronger than his upbringing. What came, that which is unseen on our island home before For a flavor of a rainbow and a mystical Leprechaun and blame the thrill to the eyes. And plunder his gold and hope he won't reclaim Triumph on the lore of his essence of identity and not blarney Irish folklore
8/27/2016 Five Rhyming Stanza's - 5 only - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Broken Wings abba rhyme scheme
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La France Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Eve, oh what a delightful write, congratulations on your win in my contest and I loved your image too ~
Callus Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Your fantasy and imagination have served you well, Eve. I truly enjoyed reading about this barefoot Irish lad. ~ Congratulations on your high flying win, Eve. Hugs // paul
Godwin Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 2:03 PM
Oh, Eve - I enjoyed my romp through your lovely poem ... CayCay
Y. Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Hi Eve, What a delightful tale. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 2:38 PM
- A really lovely story, Eve - I enjoy reading it :) - A wonderful rhyming - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:20 AM
Thank you,Anne Lise. Hugs Eve
Onclaud Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 2:21 PM
what a splendid story, eve... much enjoyed!..huggs
Roper Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:21 AM
Thank you, Nette, Hugs Eve
Wigley Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 2:05 AM
Lovely piece, Eve,I enjoyed it muchly. Viv x
Roper Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:22 AM
Thank you, Viv, Hugs Eve
Salehi Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 1:37 AM
Simply beautiful. Good luck.
Salehi Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 4:52 PM
wonderful story...
Roper Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:21 AM
Thank you, Pashang, Hugs Eve
Turner Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Fun read Mrs Eve. Leprechaun indeed! Lol You have a wonderful imagination!
Roper Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:23 AM
Thank you, Daniel. Hugs Eve
Smith Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 1:10 PM
Ah...tremendous write dear Eve,,,,good luck to you in the contest
Roper Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Thank you, Tim, so much. Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 5:32 AM
Mind blowing grandeur of images ... fantastic ... all the best ...
Roper Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 8:58 PM
Thank you, Probir, fell in love with the photo and just had to imagine his thoughts and place them on paper. Hugs Eve
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