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Barefoot

Melted the moonlight when touched the day's still sleepy skin, barefoot I walk into the morning, for my troubled spirit needs a new pair of shoes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/1/2010 10:41:00 AM
Excellent enjoyed reading Mirela. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2010 9:27:00 AM
Beautiful! and short! the best kind of poems! =>
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Date: 10/31/2010 8:35:00 AM
I like this Mirela...beautiful imagery..BG
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Date: 10/31/2010 7:23:00 AM
Awesome comparison Mirela.. in your lines.. enjoyed your creative theme this Halloween Sunday luv..
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