Barefoot

Melted the moonlight
when touched the day's still sleepy skin,
barefoot I walk into the morning,
for my troubled spirit
needs a new pair of shoes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 10:41 AM
Excellent enjoyed reading Mirela. Love, Carol
Kroeger Avatar
October 31, 2010 at 9:27 AM
Beautiful! and short! the best kind of poems! =>
Gorelick Avatar
October 31, 2010 at 8:35 AM
I like this Mirela...beautiful imagery..BG
Sweetheart Avatar
October 31, 2010 at 7:23 AM
Awesome comparison Mirela.. in your lines.. enjoyed your creative theme this Halloween Sunday luv..
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