Sotto Poet Poet Sonnet

Bare Truth Blossoming

Written: January 03, 2025 
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In a world without walls, feelings run wild,
Their vision soars, such a curious child.
Unbound by meter or syllable count,
Words ballet freely, without a surmount.

Embracing nakedness in its pure form,
Expression flows, unafraid of the norm.
Yanked bare, in virginity embrace,
Binding belt of chastity finds no place.

In meadows, we sleep quiet and serene,
A pristine haven, free from squatter scenes.
No fighting for rights, with sonnet-built homes,
Just literature's embrace, where grace roams.

Departing from rite, followers claim note,
As castles rise, passion keeps hope afloat.

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Sara Kendrick January 12, 2025 at 9:19 AM Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2025 at 5:35 AM - A beautiful poem, Las - Congratulations :) - hugs

Valsa George January 4, 2025 at 4:55 AM When there are no restrictions, thoughts run wild. I see beautiful expressions flowing, unafraid of the norm. How sweet it is rest in such a haven where there is no fighting for rights. Beautiful sonnet which I hope will be placed high. All the best, dear Lasaad. Is it about unfettered creativity?

Beryl Edmonds January 3, 2025 at 5:41 PM A beautiful sonnet Sotto, oh to be a blossoming child - “In a world without walls, feelings run wild,” … Beryl

Paige Hind January 3, 2025 at 4:35 PM Lovely writing, Sotto! This sonnet is very well-written. :)