Curtis Johnson Poet Narrative

Bare Feet

Bare Feet 

On cold wet pavement, he walked without shoes
I could not ignore this man without shoes 
Stopping him I asked, “Where are your shoes?”
He replied to me, “Someone stole my shoes”.
Giving him mine, saying, “Here are your shoes”.

11102015(PS contest, “Forty”.  40 words> 5 lines                                               of 8 words each. Sponsored by Silent One)

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Poet Destroyer A February 4, 2016 at 12:05 AM thank you, Curtis for supporting my comment

Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2016 at 11:22 PM Curtis, Congratulations on your win. XOXOX Linda :) Curtis Johnson February 1, 2016 at 3:09 PM Thank you PDA. I appreciate it.

Skat A January 26, 2016 at 12:20 PM CURTIS, CONGRATS ON YOUR NICE WIN. **SKAT** Curtis Johnson February 1, 2016 at 3:11 PM Thank you kindly Skat A.

Hansteven Selfa January 26, 2016 at 8:36 AM Congratulations Curtis on your placement! You deserve the win! :) -Hans Curtis Johnson February 1, 2016 at 3:10 PM Thank you Hansteve

Joyce Johnson January 25, 2016 at 9:42 PM Congratulations on our placement and kind words. Love, Joyce Curtis Johnson February 1, 2016 at 3:12 PM Thank you Joyce. Bless you.

Lin Lane January 25, 2016 at 8:59 PM Well done, and congrats, Curtis. Curtis Johnson January 25, 2016 at 9:00 PM Thank you Lin. Curtis Johnson January 25, 2016 at 8:59 PM Thank you kindly Silent One