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Bare Feet

Bare Feet On cold wet pavement, he walked without shoes I could not ignore this man without shoes Stopping him I asked, “Where are your shoes?” He replied to me, “Someone stole my shoes”. Giving him mine, saying, “Here are your shoes”. 11102015(PS contest, “Forty”. 40 words> 5 lines of 8 words each. Sponsored by Silent One)

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Date: 2/4/2016 12:05:00 AM
thank you, Curtis for supporting my comment
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Date: 1/31/2016 11:22:00 PM
Curtis, Congratulations on your win. XOXOX Linda :)
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Date: 2/1/2016 3:09:00 PM
Thank you PDA. I appreciate it.
Date: 1/26/2016 12:20:00 PM
CURTIS, CONGRATS ON YOUR NICE WIN. **SKAT**
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Date: 2/1/2016 3:11:00 PM
Thank you kindly Skat A.
Date: 1/26/2016 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations Curtis on your placement! You deserve the win! :) -Hans
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Date: 2/1/2016 3:10:00 PM
Thank you Hansteve
Date: 1/25/2016 9:42:00 PM
Congratulations on our placement and kind words. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/1/2016 3:12:00 PM
Thank you Joyce. Bless you.
Date: 1/25/2016 8:59:00 PM
Well done, and congrats, Curtis.
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Date: 1/25/2016 9:00:00 PM
Thank you Lin.
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Date: 1/25/2016 8:59:00 PM
Thank you kindly Silent One

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