Barcelona Flamenco

BARCELONA FLAMENCO clicking of heels, like torrential downpour. guitar plucking at the eardrums, chest wall erupting. like a hurricane of crisp crimson leaves of Autumn ~ a raked pile, blowing around in tumultuous sweep, her skirt, spread out in the expanse of rubious dawn, passion’s glorious splendor, a prolific hunger. his eyes dance as frenetic flames, hypnotized by Spain’s red cape. His imagination, like a bull, thunders, steaming nostrils, horny stabs at the glorious threads of her swirling romantic escapade. buxom black smoke and radiant yellow-gold crackles, whip the frenzy, of her smoking hot Barcelona flamenco. he nearly succumbs, exhausted from the steam room, the ferocious red waves lapping at his face, his feet, his heart. he decides he must meet her, when the fire dims, douses, settles. he must charm the incubus. 9/22/2017 Poems That Paint A Picture 3 Sponsor: Silent One
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Smith Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 1:16 PM
Great imagery Kim, congrats :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:29 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your win with a fabulous poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:02 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Ashley Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 7:46 PM
Your poem is romantic and beautifully written Kim. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Thank you, Susan!
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September 26, 2017 at 4:08 PM
Love the imagery, flow and romance of this magnificent piece - BRAVA and congratulations on your great win! Hugs. Pandita
La France Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Kim, CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 1:07 PM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Lindley Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 8:41 AM
CONGRATS ON YOUR FINE WIN MY FRIEND. A beautifully descriptive and imaginative piece revealing great depth, intensity,fire and poetic brilliance in creativity and passion.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Thanks for your wonderful comment, Robert!
Roper Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 8:05 AM
Congratulations on your win,Kim , beautiful .... Hugs Eve ~`*
Rodrigues Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Thanks, Eve! xx
One Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 7:23 AM
A poem full of great imagery.. A great take on the painting.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Rodrigues Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Thank you, Silent! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 7:06 AM
Congrats Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Vaso Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 10:23 PM
I really enjoyed this! I agree with Mike on the "tapas" :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 10:26 PM
Thank you, Arthur!
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 6:08 PM
Wow, you really captured the spirit of flamenco and the essence of that dance's meaning. I got to see it danced in Seville and in Madrid. it's so cool. I hope this places high!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 6:15 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! :)
Gentile Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 1:19 PM
I am ready for my 'Tapas" Excellent!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 4:48 PM
Thanks, Mike! :)
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September 22, 2017 at 10:15 AM
Sizzle! Awesome pen Kim! My best to you in the contest :) xomo!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 4:49 PM
Thank you, Maureen! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 9:11 AM
A beautiful picture of rhythmic dance and love you paint in this poem--each line is so delicately crafted to visualize the dance moves and emotion--best wishes for a win Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 4:49 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
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