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Barcelona Flamenco

BARCELONA FLAMENCO clicking of heels, like torrential downpour. guitar plucking at the eardrums, chest wall erupting. like a hurricane of crisp crimson leaves of Autumn ~ a raked pile, blowing around in tumultuous sweep, her skirt, spread out in the expanse of rubious dawn, passion’s glorious splendor, a prolific hunger. his eyes dance as frenetic flames, hypnotized by Spain’s red cape. His imagination, like a bull, thunders, steaming nostrils, horny stabs at the glorious threads of her swirling romantic escapade. buxom black smoke and radiant yellow-gold crackles, whip the frenzy, of her smoking hot Barcelona flamenco. he nearly succumbs, exhausted from the steam room, the ferocious red waves lapping at his face, his feet, his heart. he decides he must meet her, when the fire dims, douses, settles. he must charm the incubus. 9/22/2017 Poems That Paint A Picture 3 Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 9/27/2017 1:16:00 PM
Great imagery Kim, congrats :)
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Date: 9/27/2017 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your win with a fabulous poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2017 6:02:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Date: 9/26/2017 7:46:00 PM
Your poem is romantic and beautifully written Kim. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/26/2017 8:25:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 9/26/2017 4:08:00 PM
Love the imagery, flow and romance of this magnificent piece - BRAVA and congratulations on your great win! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 9/26/2017 1:00:00 PM
Kim, CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/26/2017 1:07:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 9/26/2017 8:41:00 AM
CONGRATS ON YOUR FINE WIN MY FRIEND. A beautifully descriptive and imaginative piece revealing great depth, intensity,fire and poetic brilliance in creativity and passion.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/26/2017 1:09:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful comment, Robert!
Date: 9/26/2017 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win,Kim , beautiful .... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/26/2017 1:09:00 PM
Thanks, Eve! xx
Date: 9/26/2017 7:23:00 AM
A poem full of great imagery.. A great take on the painting.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/26/2017 7:46:00 AM
Thank you, Silent! :)
Date: 9/26/2017 7:06:00 AM
Congrats Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/26/2017 7:46:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 9/22/2017 10:23:00 PM
I really enjoyed this! I agree with Mike on the "tapas" :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2017 10:26:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur!
Date: 9/22/2017 6:08:00 PM
Wow, you really captured the spirit of flamenco and the essence of that dance's meaning. I got to see it danced in Seville and in Madrid. it's so cool. I hope this places high!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2017 6:15:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! :)
Date: 9/22/2017 1:19:00 PM
I am ready for my 'Tapas" Excellent!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2017 4:48:00 PM
Thanks, Mike! :)
Date: 9/22/2017 10:15:00 AM
Sizzle! Awesome pen Kim! My best to you in the contest :) xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2017 4:49:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen! :)
Date: 9/22/2017 9:11:00 AM
A beautiful picture of rhythmic dance and love you paint in this poem--each line is so delicately crafted to visualize the dance moves and emotion--best wishes for a win Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2017 4:49:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!

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