Peter Dome Poet Free verse

Barbed Wire Around My Heart Barbed Wire Around My Lips

My heart bares many wounds
that will not heal
mementoes of lost love
and heartache time hasn't heeled
I have cried so many internal tears
that burned inside me
as deep as the deepest sea
but still no one understands
or knows the pain that festers deep inside me.

So I place barbed wire around my heart
and barbed wire around my lips
build a brick wall around me
that no one can strip.

I've raised the drawbridge locked the gate
being a loser in love
was my curse my fate.



''An old poem, the drawbridge is now down!.''



Peter Dome .copyright.2013. Dec.

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Poet Destroyer A September 2, 2014 at 10:20 AM I am okay, thank you for the reply, once again...Linda

Poet Destroyer A August 24, 2014 at 11:09 AM Peter, Stopping by to check out a few of the featured poems:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always~ LINDA Peter Dome August 24, 2014 at 11:57 AM Hi Lind hope your ok. so nice to hear from you. hope you#r ok. I'm thrilled. take good care. best wishes. Pete.made my day.

Betty Bateson December 31, 2013 at 10:57 AM I can relate to this feeling. You are a romantic at heart as I have read some of your other poetry. I am sure you have found love again. Keep up the great work. Peter Dome December 31, 2013 at 1:50 PM Sorry you feel that way too Betty.. I had a date recently on the phone and the times I've seen her, you could say she was crazy for me, But , she had just come our of a bad relationship, ans dhe wasn't sure anymore. I can'y blame her. I want a relationship but when I get one, I can't cope just in case I get hurt again. Thank you so much take care. best wishes. Pete.

Charlotte Puddifoot December 30, 2013 at 6:02 PM the title really intrigued me, beckoned me to read further...such sadness and pain in this, but glad to hear 'the drawbridge is now down'! hope happiness finds its way into your life...:) Charlotte Puddifoot December 30, 2013 at 6:31 PM a roller coaster eh? yours and mine both!! :) Peter Dome December 30, 2013 at 6:08 PM Thank you so much Charlotte. so kind of toy to stop by. Yes my life had been one giant roller coaster. Take care. my warmest best wishes. Pete.

Ilene Bauer December 29, 2013 at 5:08 PM very sad but so well written. the ending is amazing. i still wish you didn't feel this way, though... Peter Dome December 30, 2013 at 6:08 AM Thank you so much. it was an old poem I wrote, but I still love in hope.Great to hear from you, you are so kind. take good care. my best warm wishes. Pete. Peter Dome December 30, 2013 at 6:04 AM Hi there thank you so much great to hear from you/ it was an old poem, but I'm happy to lower the drawbridge that that special one. yake good care. my warmest best wishes. Pete.

Eileen Manassian December 29, 2013 at 5:08 PM Peter.....I feel with you. I really do. Love can hurt. Hope that drawbridge comes dowm for one who is worthy.....hugs