Barbed Wire

It cut, I bled
It spoke, I listened
It commanded, I obeyed
It laughed, I wept

Dirty things were done to me
All painful and all true
My body became a battlefield
My mind split into more than a few

Meanness, nastiness, anger and rage
Toppled me over, time and time again
Weapons formed, used against me
Oh my mind so torn, lured me to the insane

Taken for granted, used and tossed aside
What was wrong with me?
Quiet, stilled from the pain
Screaming, yelling on the inside

Years the disease roamed within
Took me for a ride, round and round
Let me out, take me off
Remove these chains keeping me bound

Stars shine, moon glows
Father’s hand has touched my soul
Standing near, watching close
Fills my heart with His heavenly host

Raising me up, renewing my mind
Releasing the spirits, tormenters no more
Casting them down in a pit of fire
No more cutting, no more barbed wire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/12/2010 6:56:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Teresa. Thank you so much for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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